Rain

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PHOTOGRAPH BY JAMIE LEE,

Clouds fill to the brim Clear as glass descends Falling from the sky Rain drops fall to earth Water everywhere. Wet, mama goose, and her goslings Waddle across Drizzling shower. Frogs croaking Tapping sounds On pond face. Flowers Drench in Rain. 6/24/2022 Sponsor Caren Krutsinger Contest Name Diminished Hexaverse Contest Your Choice of Subject

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/13/2022 3:40:00 PM

Beautiful scenes and sounds in this memorable verse, Eve. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Evelyn :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/12/2022 5:30:00 PM

Isn’t it wonderful how animals adapt to all types of weather. This is such a sweet poem Eve. Congratulations on your win! Blessings xxoo

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/11/2022 5:29:00 PM

Congratulations for your high placement! I was starting to think that Caren forgot or something. But then, she is busy posting away for at least two other poetry sights that I know of!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/11/2022 1:30:00 PM

Eve, what a lovely picture of a summer rain - so gentle and pastoral with the geese, the frogs, the flowers and the tap of the raindrops on the surface of the pond. Congratulations on your win dear friend. Blessings as abundant as raindrops to you!

Deb M

Date: 6/24/2022 4:19:00 AM

Lovely Eve….the photo is lovely also! Debx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/24/2022 1:37:00 AM

Very descriptive. Loved it. Hugs.