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Rain - Florida

persistent drizzle on a summer afternoon -- flash flood warnings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 7/30/2023 2:41:00 PM
nicely done, kim!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/1/2023 7:33:00 PM
Thank you, Ilene!
Date: 7/29/2023 10:12:00 PM
Very good haiku. I especially liked the turn after that second line. Good luck in the contest.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/1/2023 7:33:00 PM
Eileen, it's so good to see you! Thank you for your comment!
Date: 7/29/2023 8:45:00 PM
An interesting submission for the contest, I like it, good luck! -AG
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/1/2023 7:32:00 PM
Thank you, Arastu! I'm glad you like it!

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