Rain-Soaked

Raindrops on the awning, playing a dancer's melody... Clouds across the sky, running with the wind... Grass bent with water, quenching its thirst... You at my side, soaking it all in.

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Robert Lindley

Date: 12/24/2015 5:29:00 PM

Congrats on your win!

George Aul
Date: 12/28/2015 9:43:00 AM

Thanks for the comment........... George

Skat A

Date: 12/24/2015 2:18:00 AM

GEORGE,,, Congratulations on your wonderful Rain win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. Smiles & Joy **SKAT**

George Aul
Date: 12/28/2015 9:43:00 AM

Thank you SKAT, and you have the same.......... George

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/31/2011 6:03:00 PM

Rain-clouds-grass--then your one true love. This is full of nature and adoration, George. Love the motion of nature dispersed thru out. Gwendolen Do u have a waterproof container for me to keep this in for my favs? ....ha

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2011 3:34:00 PM

This is so lovely, George. What a great rain poem!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/21/2011 11:11:00 AM

Lovely portrait of two in your words George.. so nice to see u here today ...come join in my birthday celebration via soup.. today.. only sunshine but rain later luv.. enjoyed..my friend..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/21/2011 9:00:00 AM

Very nice image flows from this write... I think %75 of my poems include the word rain at one point, nicely done my friend...