Rain-Pa

In the fiery blaze earth's parched lips long for respite~ raindrops bring solace.

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/31/2023 7:26:00 PM

Indeed, raindrops bring soace. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

David Kavanagh

Date: 7/31/2023 12:37:00 PM

Exquisite imagery here Lasaad, yes the Earth is burning a lot more than usual, weather patterns are totally messed up, congratulations on your win in Kim’s contest cheers David

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/31/2023 10:49:00 AM

Lovely imagery, dear Lasaad! Congratulations on your win in my contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/30/2023 1:45:00 PM

- Excellently written, Las - some really needs rain... here it has been raining for almost all of July... best wishes ... a winner without a doubt :) - hugs

Deb M

Date: 7/29/2023 9:58:00 PM

Simply but powerfully said Lasaad! Debx

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/29/2023 6:05:00 PM

My lips feel dry, reading this my friend. There are not many feelings worse than being incredible thirst with no sign of water. Then rain ! You have told a whole chapter of a story in a few words. A masterful Haiku. Absolutely first class.