Beryl Edmonds Poet Limerick

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Written - 31st October 2024

Holiday Humour - Limerick Set Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 

 

Rags to Riches in Panto Time

'Twas Christmas when Cinder’s went to the ball
In the most romantic season of all
She looked so pretty
A prince so dishy
Danced each dance with her, till she heard her call.

The call came when the clock struck at midnight 
Cinder's ran quickly as she could, in fright
Before her best dress
Became repossessed
As her fairy godmother said it might.

It so happened she lost one glass slipper
That made poor Cinder's heart take a dipper  
All know the glory
Of Cinder's story 
Prince Charming wed her, it’s out on twitter.

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Andrea Dietrich November 22, 2024 at 11:08 AM Back with congrats. Have a great Thanksgiving. Beryl Edmonds February 4, 2025 at 6:50 PM Thank you Andrea… Beryl

Jim Healey November 17, 2024 at 1:33 PM Congratulations, Beryl. Nice set of limericks. Fun to read. Take care. J. Beryl Edmonds November 17, 2024 at 5:31 PM Thank you Jim, I do enjoy reading and writing Limericks… Beryl

Tania Kitchin November 17, 2024 at 11:59 AM Beryl, I enjoyed your fun and creative limerick set, congratulations on your winning placement. Beryl Edmonds November 17, 2024 at 5:29 PM Thank you Tania, it was a delight to take part in your contest and I enjoyed reading all the entries… Beryl

Andrea Dietrich November 5, 2024 at 8:14 PM What a cute modernized ending. Out in twitter! Beryl Edmonds November 6, 2024 at 12:20 AM Thank you Andrea, pleased you liked the ending… Beryl

Valsa George November 4, 2024 at 8:24 PM Hi Beryl, you have done an impressive retelling of the Cinderella story in limerick form. Great rhyming and beautiful presentation. Beryl Edmonds November 6, 2024 at 12:13 AM Thank you very much Valsa, it was fun to write this for the contest… Beryl

Jennifer Proxenos November 2, 2024 at 10:07 PM I have always loved the Cinderella story - so romantic, so perfect. i met my Prince Charming at a wedding and we danced all night, and we both fell in love almost instantly, and the next day a vase of 24 red roses were delivered with an I LOVE YOU message, yet we only got married 25 years later. So I do love this poem very much. Hope you are well my friend, hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Beryl Edmonds November 3, 2024 at 3:19 PM Jennifer you have a lovely story of romance, meeting your Prince Charming at a wedding and dancing all night together, just like Cinderella. Such a lovely gesture from your Prince, 24 roses and an ‘I Love You’ message the very next day. It has to be love, getting married 25 years later. Love changes everything, sooner or later… Blessings and hugs… Beryl

Ink Empress November 1, 2024 at 3:29 PM Dear Beryl, cinderella was a personal fave of mine so it sure is nice reading this, i love the way you always rhyme whichever form, and these limericks are fun and especially when you mentioned twitter it made me smile! Nowadays everythings on twitter haha, or X i prefer calling the app twitter. Pleasure reading you, best wishes for the contest ~ sending you light always Beryl Edmonds November 3, 2024 at 3:40 PM Thank you Ink, I enjoy writing about pantomime stars like Cinderella, I wrote about Snow White in the early days of joining PoetrySoup, it’s one of my personal favourites. Sending light to you in return… Beryl

John Read November 1, 2024 at 11:01 AM Hi sister Beryl, your certainly the belle of the ball, good luck in the contest, sadly the best poem doesn't always win for some reason. Beryl Edmonds November 3, 2024 at 3:33 PM That’s so nice of you brother John. I enjoy entering contests, win or lose, because they inspire the muse. It doesn’t really matter at all, poets know themselves whether their poem is good or not, we are our own poetry judge… Sis Beryl

Daniel Henry Rodgers November 1, 2024 at 7:56 AM Ohh Dear Beryl, such a creative retelling of the story with some modern motifs. What an enjoyable read that flowed like a stream after winter. Love It!! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Beryl Edmonds November 3, 2024 at 3:24 PM Thank you dear friend Daniel, so pleased that you enjoyed the read. The seasons blessings to you too. Poet pal Beryl

Michael Tor October 31, 2024 at 11:14 PM Clever and witty Beryl. Thank you in your effort in creating and sharing. A wonderful submission for the Contest. Best of luck my friend... Beryl Edmonds November 3, 2024 at 3:20 PM Thank you so much Michael, you’ve made my heart sing dear friend… Beryl

David Crandall October 31, 2024 at 3:31 PM Great update to the old story Beryl! Beryl Edmonds October 31, 2024 at 7:25 PM Thank you David… Beryl

Tom Cunningham October 31, 2024 at 6:09 AM Brilliant Beryl, you've got me in a Christmas mood now lol, good luck in the contest. Tom Beryl Edmonds October 31, 2024 at 12:00 PM Thank you Tom, Christmas will be here before we know it, with all the joy and empty pockets… Beryl

Victor Buhagiar October 31, 2024 at 2:59 AM What a great way to recount the story of Cinderella and a great way to end the story. Deserves a high placement. Beryl Edmonds October 31, 2024 at 5:27 AM Thank you very much Victor, nice of you and much appreciated… Beryl