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Raging Wind

Alas! greed reigns in all spheres,a man seeks his own revolving on self. This wind blowing thru space,no escape for all,so contagious none is left behind. Animate inanimate-the fair wind wind blew,as white foam of life flew in every area. The furrow followed free,as we burst out into the silent sea of heads sinking Into oblivion of despair. Children birth forth plows in field of distress,hope is gone and joy limps on one Foot-the future seem bleak in a blank world. The raging wind sweeps thru carrying all along,keeping nothing aside till none Exists,insatiable lust for self pervades the atmosphere where those on the path Of escape looks up to find hope,what hope? Whining like a horse,these shattered souls seek futile redemption,friends and Foes alike, renders empty words of hope,hoping to back-stab the downtrodden. Swindling the little left in these shadowy figures. Lo! I see light rays across the horizon seemingly rising from the dark shades to Illuminate the gloomy hearts....alas!! who bears this light of change? You and i? Hold my hands and lets start somewhere.....

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Date: 9/11/2017 9:51:00 AM
thanks for your observation and i truly appreciate bro.
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Date: 9/10/2017 6:30:00 PM
Correct coma and spaces. Good thoughts. More form would help.
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Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu
Date: 9/11/2017 9:51:00 AM
its an honor to have u around
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 9/10/2017 6:30:00 PM
Yet very good thoughts

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