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Rage of Mortal Despair

Verdant hills fluttered whispers of amber winds And flowers too smiled on the face of morning Yet, nothing was the same in season’s dawning Disfigured by blemish on visage of new spring When shadows of death spread indiscriminately As a pernicious virus began flexing its virulence. Spirits started to dampen bearing helpless sighs When a doctor, quite distressed, took her own life-- Like a sentry she guarded her intubated ward Yet, one by one, they were dying on her watch As corridors of hospitals became makeshift morgues And a stygian night killed a child in her arms While someone’s grandma without closure passed Longing to hug her grandchild for one last time Too weak to raise her hand for a final goodbye. Forces of doom continue to traverse worldwide Stymying the tempo of commercial enterprise And darkness defies astral aura of heavens above Ravaging relentlessly millions and millions of lives As rage of mortal despair endlessly smolders on. November 7, 2020 Placed 1st: Eight word challenge 11 poetry contest Sponsor: John Hamilton Given words are presented in the following order: BLEMISH, VISAGE, PERNICIOUS, DAMPEN SENTRY, TRAVERSE, ENTERPRISE, ASTRAL

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Date: 11/30/2021 5:05:00 AM
''And darkness defies astral aura of heavens above Ravaging relentlessly millions and millions of lives''. Even after two years, the threat still hangs over mankind like Democles' sword ! Now a new variant Omicron is sneaking in, drowning the world in uncertainty.You have absorbed the heartache of the whole of humanity in your wonderful lines
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Date: 1/24/2021 1:26:00 PM
Times are rough. I hope we get a reprieve soon through everyone getting the vaccination. Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Date: 11/15/2020 3:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Vijay. Well deserved.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/20/2021 5:50:00 AM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.
Date: 11/14/2020 7:49:00 PM
Vijay an amazing poem....Congrats on a Top Win :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/20/2021 5:50:00 AM
Thank you Carol.
Date: 11/13/2020 5:28:00 PM
Another fantastic poem Vijay, congrats on another top win!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/14/2020 2:02:00 PM
Thank you John--so special to win your contest. And precious to read your comments. Much appreciate, as always.
Date: 11/13/2020 1:47:00 PM
I am so happy to come back wishing you congratulations on your first place win, your poetic talent is so pure and inspiring!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/14/2020 2:03:00 PM
That is so nice to hear, Michelle--much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 11/8/2020 8:23:00 PM
My heart aches knowing that so many are taken from this world- due to a virus beyond our control. Other health issues were the cause of several in my world passing away. Not this virus. It is still heartbreaking. Your thoughts curl softly around me. ~ Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2020 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Brandy--much appreciate, as always.
Date: 11/8/2020 8:13:00 AM
So eloquent, a darkly potent tale of the clouds we all live under now, the use of the required words just sublime, best wishes for the contest!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2020 7:49:00 AM
Thank you Michelle--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 11/7/2020 7:32:00 PM
One word...Magnificent. Vijay, you’re such a brilliant poet! Good luck in the contest :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2020 6:02:00 AM
So very kind of you to say so, Akkina. Much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks.
Date: 11/7/2020 6:48:00 PM
I love the way you make the words dance on the page at the right temp, everywhere I look I see a sad story that closes in on the heart, Gl in the contest dear Vijay,
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2020 6:01:00 AM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate your kind remarks. many thanks, Vienna.
Date: 11/7/2020 3:47:00 PM
Great feeling in this one. For me, it is a future world where indeed millions will die and not thousands like today. Love how you incorporated the words and also added great words of your own!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2020 6:00:00 AM
Yes, we have to be vigilant about the future. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Andrea. many thanks.
Date: 11/7/2020 11:46:00 AM
Very profound, Vijay. You have painted a perfect picture of the world today with your words. Hope you have a great weekend :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2020 5:59:00 AM
Much appreciate your kind remarks, Angela--many many thanks.
Date: 11/7/2020 9:11:00 AM
I could feel the darkness and angst in your words... You did really well with those words and created a great poem..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2020 5:58:00 AM
Great to hear this from the one and only. Much appreciate, SO. Many thanks.
Date: 11/7/2020 6:36:00 AM
A frightening scene you've created Vijay and so very true, Ive got a feeling its going to be with us for some time. Great use of the allocated words. Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2020 5:57:00 AM
You are right Tom--it's not going away till vaccine is found. Much appreciate, as always--many thanks.
Date: 11/7/2020 5:25:00 AM
A very sad but true situation. A poem built on emotions of a cruel pandemic. Brilliant execution of sentiments in this ailing world. Top class poetry. ~~
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2020 5:56:00 AM
So very kind of you Victor. Much appreciate your kind remarks--many thanks.

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