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Rag Factory

This factory has the bales delivered. Bales of unwanted, disused, thrown about, torn up, ripped and antiquated clothes. Once loved but not now. Bales measured by tonnes. Bales needing the forklift. Bales delivered once a month. This factory hauls these bales, one at a time, to the factory floor. On the floor they are ripped open and gutted, their blood of clothes oozing across the floor before the cutters. The cutters who take never ending handfuls of this gut to their trolley, to their cutting machine. This factory slices arms off, rips legs open, carves neck lines off, zippers and buttons slashed away, never to see the pants again. The entire garment scored back to its crude original form. A form of square material. Square material with nothing of interest, unwearable. And tossed into the empty waiting bag, Waiting to become 15kg of unwearable square slices of material. This factory fills an empty bag to 15kg, hundreds of 15kg bags. These bags await the drive to a new owner. An owner who’ll love this square rag in a moment. Become intimate with this square in a moment. Sharing this square with oil, grease, dirt, mud, rust, stains and fuels. Once unloved and unused becomes unwearable to useful and one last spike of intimacy again before the inevitable oblivion takes the rag for the final joy ride. The rag factory.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/13/2016 11:25:00 PM
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 2/14/2016 3:53:00 PM
lol. :)
Date: 12/24/2015 11:04:00 PM
Sorry that I previously missed replying to this contest being finished. Congrats on your well deserved win my friend.
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 2/10/2016 9:39:00 PM
Thanks Robert.
Date: 12/20/2015 12:35:00 AM
Lewis, Congrats on your win In Rob Carmack's Oblivion contest. Love ~LINDA~
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 2/10/2016 9:40:00 PM
Thanks Linda. :)
Date: 12/19/2015 3:09:00 PM
LWEIS, Congrats on your Oblivion WIN **SKAT**
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 2/10/2016 9:41:00 PM
Thanks Skat A :)
Date: 12/19/2015 10:33:00 AM
Wow, the metaphors are endless. Very vivid journey the reader travels. Thanks.
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 2/10/2016 9:42:00 PM
Thanks Toni, glad u enjoyed the Factory. :)
Date: 12/17/2015 11:21:00 AM
nice. pleasure to read your work
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 2/10/2016 9:43:00 PM
Glad u enjoyed my poem Boygene, thankyou.

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