Rag Factory

This factory has the bales delivered. Bales of unwanted, disused, thrown about, torn up, ripped and antiquated clothes. Once loved but not now. Bales measured by tonnes. Bales needing the forklift. Bales delivered once a month.
This factory hauls these bales, one at a time, to the factory floor. On the floor they are ripped open and gutted, their blood of clothes oozing across the floor before the cutters. The cutters who take never ending handfuls of this gut to their trolley, to their cutting machine.
This factory slices arms off, rips legs open, carves neck lines off, zippers and buttons slashed away, never to see the pants again. The entire garment scored back to its crude original form. A form of square material. Square material with nothing of interest, unwearable.
And tossed into the empty waiting bag, Waiting to become 15kg of unwearable square slices of material.
This factory fills an empty bag to 15kg, hundreds of 15kg bags. These bags await the drive to a new owner. An owner who’ll love this square rag in a moment. Become intimate with this square in a moment. Sharing this square with oil, grease, dirt, mud, rust, stains and fuels. 
Once unloved and unused becomes unwearable to useful and one last spike of intimacy again before the inevitable oblivion takes the rag for the final joy ride.
The rag factory.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 13, 2016 at 11:25 PM
Thank you for the reply
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February 14, 2016 at 3:53 PM
lol. :)
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December 24, 2015 at 11:04 PM
Sorry that I previously missed replying to this contest being finished. Congrats on your well deserved win my friend.
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February 10, 2016 at 9:39 PM
Thanks Robert.
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December 20, 2015 at 12:35 AM
Lewis, Congrats on your win In Rob Carmack's Oblivion contest. Love ~LINDA~
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February 10, 2016 at 9:40 PM
Thanks Linda. :)
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December 19, 2015 at 3:09 PM
LWEIS, Congrats on your Oblivion WIN **SKAT**
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February 10, 2016 at 9:41 PM
Thanks Skat A :)
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December 19, 2015 at 10:33 AM
Wow, the metaphors are endless. Very vivid journey the reader travels. Thanks.
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February 10, 2016 at 9:42 PM
Thanks Toni, glad u enjoyed the Factory. :)
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December 17, 2015 at 11:21 AM
nice. pleasure to read your work
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February 10, 2016 at 9:43 PM
Glad u enjoyed my poem Boygene, thankyou.
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