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Outside, the sound of two children at play, she pushed a pram, he kicked a yellow ball, a van approached, he scuttled out the way 'scrap iron!' came the monotonic call. My childhood, I remember on this street the rag 'n bone man, cart pulled by a horse my football clattered, bounced between its feet like pinballs on their strange erratic course. The old man took scrap iron, steel and lead, would sharpen household blades and garden shears, take them back to his workshop in his shed, flat cap on head, pencil behind his ear. With all his best intentions this pair's job would never earn a living year on year it seemed to me pin money, a few bob, the greater need his cigarettes, or beer. Did he consider packing it all in his future at that age counted in days four legged partner old and tired like him so close that time when they would part the ways? On the school building, sunset washed the wall, their passing shadows cast answered it all. For contest 'eight word challenge', sponsor Robert Haigh 14th march 2018

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Date: 3/16/2018 4:49:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 3/15/2018 9:17:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in your poem, Viv, and written very well using the required words. Congratulations on your 3rd place win! Hugs,
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Date: 3/15/2018 7:06:00 PM
Love your poem, Viv...sad story, but so well-written. Congratulations on your podium win. Sandra
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Date: 3/15/2018 4:51:00 PM
Very cool write, Viv. Nostalgia abounds. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/15/2018 8:11:00 AM
wonderful poetic characterization. You picture well the emotional pull of getting something for nothing. Applause! for the write; Applause! for the win.
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Date: 3/15/2018 1:03:00 AM
Congratulations, Viv on your great win with a wonderful write.
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Date: 3/14/2018 11:39:00 PM
Wonderful write, Viv - love this take on the theme! Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win - blessings, and keep up the great work, friend! :-)
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Date: 3/14/2018 9:25:00 PM
Very moving and descriptive, Viv! CONGRATS. Janice
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/14/2018 9:27:00 PM
Thanks Janice, glad you liked it x
Date: 3/14/2018 4:19:00 PM
Viv, what a well deserved win. Tales to be told such as this are what history is made of. Thank you for imparting this to those of us on Soup who otherwise would never be aware of the historical value of the Rag and Bone men of old. Great poem, my friend.
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Date: 3/14/2018 8:51:00 PM
Thanks Curtis, hope you're keeping well. Regards, Viv
Date: 3/14/2018 4:18:00 PM
Amazing imagery, Viv, and presented in beautiful nostalgic fashion. Lovely. Congrats on your podium win.
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Date: 3/14/2018 8:52:00 PM
Thanks Line, and for the typo heads up x
Date: 3/14/2018 1:42:00 PM
Love this one! Congrats on your win, Viv. :)
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Date: 3/14/2018 8:52:00 PM
Thanks Laura, love you too x
Date: 3/14/2018 12:05:00 PM
This is a great story and very well written. Congrats.
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Date: 3/14/2018 8:54:00 PM
Thanks Dale, I'm a huge nostalgia fan. Probably because the present is rubbish. Regards, Viv
Date: 3/14/2018 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations Viv, bet that theme tune will be going around in your head now.lol
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Date: 3/14/2018 8:54:00 PM
Duh duh derderder duh duh derderder di duh duh.....bob bob bob bob
Date: 3/13/2018 9:09:00 PM
Rag'N'Bone Man. Whoa, Nellie! Way back in the wayback machine...
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Date: 3/13/2018 8:28:00 AM
took me back to Steptoe and Son but I do remember the rag and bone man coming round our road and also the knife sharpener - great memories Mr Viv:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/13/2018 7:55:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 3/13/2018 7:10:00 AM
You describe this memory so vividly, I can see the scene. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/13/2018 7:27:00 AM
Thanks Agnes, I'm pleased such recollections still remain, but I couldn't tell you what I cooked for lunch last Tuesday. Viv x
Date: 3/13/2018 6:34:00 AM
A moment caught in time! I really enjoyed! Read it through a couple of times! Well done, Viv!
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Date: 3/13/2018 7:28:00 AM
Thanks Kim, a timeslice of simpler days. Viv x
Date: 3/13/2018 5:59:00 AM
Wow , that took me back , never see them now , and Steptoe and son on the rented black and white T.V. brilliant Viv. Good luck.
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Date: 3/13/2018 7:29:00 AM
'arold! 'arold! Now I'm stuck with the theme tune in my head for the day. Thanks, Tom.... regards, Viv

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