Radio...

Excruciations--- tuned up... Yearnings--- beated out... Agony--- amplified... And--- A ripple ruffled through the dampened self to break it's Slumber... V@@S...

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/20/2009 4:51:00 AM

Welcome to PoetrySoup. Keep writing and sharing your awesome poetry with us. Love, Carol

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/18/2009 1:55:00 PM

change the station and you will change your oppinion. john

Pravaas :- Anodyned Eternally...

Date: 1/9/2009 8:30:00 AM

Thank you derrick and Judy! my pleasure to hear from you friends:-)

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/5/2009 11:54:00 AM

this poem was short but packed a powerful punch that really hit home as far as poetry. enjoyed reading it. P.S. Give some some feed back to get feed back in return, it could be any one.

Judy Riley

Date: 1/5/2009 11:01:00 AM

Let me guess, sleeping with the radio on relieves stress, I can relate to that, well written short to the point, good poem. Judy Riley