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Racing Raindrops

It starts as mizzle, a lethargic drizzle dribbling down the pane. It’s dull and grey on this miserable day - I want to have some fun, a sudden flash brings a big fat splash raindrop racing has begun. The skies rock the starters block, they’re pelting down the pane, tipping, slipping, constantly dripping, never ever still, chasing, pacing, always racing each other to the sill, lashing, dashing, splishing, splashing giving me such a thrill. Their watery tails leave comet trails blazing across the pane. They’re hell for leather in this inclement weather then out peeps the sun, her soft warm glow makes the raindrops slow evaporating every one. 26/5/2013

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Date: 5/30/2013 3:03:00 PM
This is certainly a bit different. Loved the lines describing the rain. Congrats. BG
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Date: 5/30/2013 11:56:00 AM
great write and win Rachel....congrats
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Rachel Fawcett
Date: 5/30/2013 12:17:00 PM
thank you
Date: 5/30/2013 9:28:00 AM
Big congrats on your outstanding win. AO
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Rachel Fawcett
Date: 5/30/2013 12:17:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 5/30/2013 9:07:00 AM
congrats on your 5th place win Rachel, interesting concept
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Rachel Fawcett
Date: 5/30/2013 12:17:00 PM
Thank you.

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