Quote Me Rumi

You walked through the doors of the ancient temple
The large metal doors with the silhouette of nude cherubs engraved on them
A dagger in your heart
A smile on your face
Arms stretched from sides
Asking me for an embrace
Lights gushing through your wounds
No sign of blood
In my dream you were alive
Coming back to me through those blue metal doors

Dec 02, 2015
"The wound is the place where the light enters you."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/6/2015 9:31:00 AM
For me this is one of the best. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/7/2015 7:05:00 AM
Thank you Richard... It's very kind of you... Love, Rahy
Date: 12/4/2015 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations Rahy.
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Date: 12/4/2015 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Nayda, love, Rahy
Date: 12/3/2015 11:21:00 PM
Congrats on ur great win with this wonderful write Rahy!
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Date: 12/4/2015 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Upma, love, Rahy
Date: 12/3/2015 6:34:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Rahy Hy
Date: 12/4/2015 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Jan, love, Rahy
Date: 12/3/2015 5:22:00 PM
Rahy, Congratulations on your Quoting Rumi Win. SKAT ** Love
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Date: 12/4/2015 7:49:00 AM
Thank you Skat, love, Rahy
Date: 12/2/2015 2:09:00 PM
Good one, Rahy. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for the visit to my poem.
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Date: 12/2/2015 2:33:00 PM
Thank you Eileen jan... Miss you :*
Date: 12/2/2015 1:54:00 PM
such deep and sad imagery Rahy good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/2/2015 2:04:00 PM
Thanks Jan... Same to you :*
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