Rahy Hy Poet Free verse

Quote Me Rumi

You walked through the doors of the ancient temple
The large metal doors with the silhouette of nude cherubs engraved on them
A dagger in your heart
A smile on your face
Arms stretched from sides
Asking me for an embrace
Lights gushing through your wounds
No sign of blood
In my dream you were alive
Coming back to me through those blue metal doors

Dec 02, 2015
"The wound is the place where the light enters you."

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Richard Lamoureux December 6, 2015 at 9:31 AM For me this is one of the best. Congratulations on your win. Rahy Hy December 7, 2015 at 7:05 AM Thank you Richard... It's very kind of you... Love, Rahy

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 4, 2015 at 7:06 AM Congratulations Rahy. Rahy Hy December 4, 2015 at 7:50 AM Thank you Nayda, love, Rahy

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 3, 2015 at 11:21 PM Congrats on ur great win with this wonderful write Rahy! Rahy Hy December 4, 2015 at 7:50 AM Thank you Dr. Upma, love, Rahy

Jan Allison December 3, 2015 at 6:34 PM Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Rahy Hy December 4, 2015 at 7:50 AM Thank you Jan, love, Rahy

Skat A December 3, 2015 at 5:22 PM Rahy, Congratulations on your Quoting Rumi Win. SKAT ** Love Rahy Hy December 4, 2015 at 7:49 AM Thank you Skat, love, Rahy

Eileen Manassian December 2, 2015 at 2:09 PM Good one, Rahy. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for the visit to my poem. Rahy Hy December 2, 2015 at 2:33 PM Thank you Eileen jan... Miss you :*

Jan Allison December 2, 2015 at 1:54 PM such deep and sad imagery Rahy good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Rahy Hy December 2, 2015 at 2:04 PM Thanks Jan... Same to you :*