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As you stroke my soft skin, delicately, darling, i get a quivering fever much like the flickering tongue of a snake; from head to toe. You thrill me with each touch! Date written: 11/23/2020

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Date: 1/3/2021 3:31:00 AM
As well as the trembling definition of quiver I'm also reminded of Cupid's arrows held in a quiver. Congratulations on your win. Cheers - Gary
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/3/2021 10:03:00 AM
Thank you very much, Gary:-)
Date: 1/3/2021 2:58:00 AM
Such a romantic piece...congrats on your win Edward :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/3/2021 10:02:00 AM
Thanks so much, Carol!:-)
Date: 11/23/2020 11:44:00 AM
Hello Edward, this is so romantic. I enjoyed the read. Haaave a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/23/2020 3:55:00 PM
Hello Edward, I did have a good day. now enjoying my evening. Enjoy your evening to my friend.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/23/2020 11:48:00 AM
Thank you so much, Darlene:-) Have a nice day as well, my friend!

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