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Date written: 03/31/2023

you touch my skin, and I quiver, not from the cold wind outdoors. oh, the warmth of your healing fingertips! it's all-consuming. it soothes me body and soul. in your soft hands, rumbling thunder of fever in the climax of winter; a sudden jolt of electricity... that sets ablaze neurons coursing through my brain inexplicable, the strange yet divine feeling that takes hold of me. each touch, a sublime sensation, cap-a-pie; as if comfortably wrapped in velvet. you touch my skin, and I quiver.

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Date: 4/21/2023 10:41:00 AM
Edward, congrats and high fives on your win! I love the contrast between fire and ice, hot and cold. Very romantically evocative with metaphoric bliss. Sending you continued Easter season blessing my friend!
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Date: 4/3/2023 3:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/story/ending. Enjoy your win/day with blessings................
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Date: 4/3/2023 3:29:00 AM
Edward, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/3/2023 4:18:00 AM
Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, dear Constance:-) Most obliged.
Date: 4/2/2023 9:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win in the Contest . Well Written
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/3/2023 2:40:00 AM
Thank you so much, Alfonso:-)
Date: 4/2/2023 4:20:00 PM
Fabulous Edward. A great take on 'quiver'. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/3/2023 2:40:00 AM
Thank you very much, Linda:-)
Date: 3/31/2023 7:30:00 PM
Awesome, Edward:)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/1/2023 3:20:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jo:-)
Date: 3/31/2023 5:20:00 AM
NAILED IT!!!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/31/2023 5:28:00 AM
Thank you very much, John:-)

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