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Quitting Getting On My Own Nerves

Snacking on seaweed and banana today To see if it improves my mood Hopefully my vitamin investment will pay And my perspective will become unskewed My busy brain has ceased to be I'm currently numb instead I'd love to imagine it's because I'm free But believe it's another trick of the head I've set myself a couple of tasks The library and a hair cut Pondering my many different masks And that cut rhymes with just nut Off I go on the cusp of change A new and improved version It's natural I'll feel strange But I need to fight against reversion It's basically 'getting on my own nerves' I declare it rather freely Though saying such things diminishes my reserves I'll just be calm ideally

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Date: 2/17/2023 8:50:00 AM
Great write, work it out , keep moving forward: )
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Date: 2/17/2023 8:57:00 AM
Thanks again Stephen
Date: 2/17/2023 4:38:00 AM
Great Poem DD…..love the Title! Debx
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Date: 2/17/2023 5:09:00 AM
Nor did I DD…..x
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Date: 2/17/2023 4:52:00 AM
Thank you Deb! I never realised how cathartic poetry could be :)

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