Quip's Iv At the Rapture

I was searching for my EX-Girlfriend for three(03) day's.  She just disappeared in to thin air in the blink of an eye..... I searched high and low. Everything was not left in place as usual.

Then, A couple of my friend's told me that she was caught-up, in the RAPTURE. Boy, you could imagine my dismay......

It turned out that I was wrong....Yes, she was caught-up in the RAPTURE... Only, it turned out to be, not the "Rapture" the "Rapture", But, Rapture The Nite CLUB!....AND she was caught in a police DRUG raid as part of an independent  investigation!....

She had been in jail for three(03) more day's. Turn's out that she did not need an
Absolution...She needed a drink and another lawyer...

******The Moral to this story is********

Things' are not always' what they seem! Always' get your story straight! Or else,
you will be caught at the "Rapture" too......

                             GF

  *****Note:*******

     And on the seventh (07th) day, she did rest.........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/28/2011 2:20:00 PM
I loved the moral of the story.X-celent write!
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Gary Fields
Date: 7/31/2014 11:52:00 PM
Hey Dan, if you get this post me and let me know where to find you... leave a message.
Date: 8/28/2011 10:30:00 AM
if true ..oh boy.. if just a poetic art piece.. wow.. the play on words is phenomenal Gary luv. and the moral is absolutely correct .. nothing is as it seems in life sometimes.. great write my friend.. now where is that Tribulation bio ???
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