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Quintile-Sweet Verse

words too familiar or too remote defeat the purpose of which, he wrote was his hidden enigma a step too far, if no-one could open his jar Inspired by Johnson's famous dictum

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/4/2009 8:15:00 AM
Excellent verse Brian, Very true! Many could learn by being what they are in the jar, without words, if they would. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/4/2009 7:20:00 AM
Wow....you have captured in just a few words...this complex tale! Great job!!
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Date: 11/4/2009 5:37:00 AM
Interesting verse. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/4/2009 1:01:00 AM
Wonderfully penned, love the rhythm and rhyme you hve weaved in with a short story, well done! Anna-Marie
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