Quintessence of Dust

[With a nod to the Bard]


We are the moving dust,
we are the breathing dust,
we are the seeing dust,
we are the living dust.

But how, you ask, and rightly 
so, can dust fall asleep,
dreaming of places unknown,
and lovers unmet-- how can
dust imagine whole worlds 
and love with one heart for
60 winters and 60 summers?

And do the notes that stir life
come also from dust, just a 
little dust and nothing more?
When the music is played 
and dust dances with dust, 
and dust laughs with dust
and soon dust loves dust,
can dust ever understand
the paradox of its own 
being, from dust to dust?

Not until the winds come,
the warm winds of Eternity,
will dust be blown away, 
leaving the unseen soul
alive, to walk and breathe
and dance and love, bathed 
forever in the dustless Light...


[posted 2/27/21]

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 4/27/2021 2:53:00 PM
this is so very intereting and creative. Congrats!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/28/2021 12:41:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I'm glad you like it
Date: 4/27/2021 9:00:00 AM
Thanks for this interesting read L.J, congrats on a nice win!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/28/2021 12:40:00 PM
And thank you for the honor, John
Date: 3/8/2021 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations on the win LJ! Linda
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/9/2021 1:37:00 PM
Thanks Linda
Date: 3/6/2021 6:52:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your verse, L.J. congratulations on your win.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/7/2021 8:48:00 AM
Thanks Eve!
Date: 3/6/2021 5:27:00 PM
LJ, wonderful write , congratulations on your win in Chantelle's contest with this excellent poem, well done _Constance
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/7/2021 8:48:00 AM
Thanks Constance, much appreciated!
Date: 3/2/2021 6:19:00 AM
Excellent idea penned. I enjoyed reading this winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/2/2021 2:27:00 PM
Thanks Sara--I'm glad you like it!
Date: 3/1/2021 9:51:00 PM
WoW! L. J., What a deep and thought-provoking write. It is filled with much wisdom. I will have to read this again, like a good book that you have to read another time. Each read you see something new. I’m going to add this to my fav collection. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/1/2021 11:35:00 AM
Maybe that is the last time I will "dust!" This piece is a multi-layered verse of wisdom to be pondered as we delve through the layers and layers of profound "dust.!" Wonderfully expressed LJ! Congratulations! I love the last lines of the dust removed from our vision in eternity! Blessings my friend.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/2/2021 2:23:00 PM
Thanks Sam, and as always, may you and yours go with God...
Date: 3/1/2021 7:20:00 AM
Very cool how you did this. Congrats on your win and thanks for entering my contest.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/2/2021 2:22:00 PM
And thank you for the honor
Date: 2/28/2021 3:27:00 AM
This is a beautiful, evocative, detailed and elegant outline of wise thoughts on life. It gives a fuller analysis than my sonnet: ‘The Dust or the Wind’.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/28/2021 10:33:00 AM
Thanks Geoff--it's one of those poems that when I re-read it, I am amazed it came out of me!
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