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Quietness

I liked to be quiet, In a white ferry, between Brittany and England, Quietness is a precious diamond To offer to a new girl, or a cat, I like to be quiet, everywhere, In a Syrian garden, when the sun freeze the time, I like stillness of grass in the city, Il like to be quiet, now and here, Like a summer road in the desert, Asking for nothing more, that the buzz Of a bee, or the gasp of a summer wind.

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Date: 2/26/2024 9:40:00 AM
Takes me back Yann... Really likable wording Here.
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Date: 5/25/2023 11:10:00 AM
Great images. Yann. Took me a while to find a poem of yours I had not yet commented on.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 5/25/2023 1:50:00 PM
thanks andrea, it is very supportive and generous, have a nice day, it is late here
Date: 4/25/2023 7:24:00 PM
Thank you, Yann for this lovely poem. Great metaphors. A FAV for me. Blessings.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 5/25/2023 1:51:00 PM
thanks a lot Thompson emate, this is so supportive have a nice day
Date: 3/24/2023 9:27:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughts
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Yann Rolland
Date: 3/25/2023 12:53:00 AM
Thanks William, for reading , I appreciate have a nice day
Date: 3/13/2023 1:01:00 PM
Very nice imagery, Yann. Very nice poem. I enjoyed it! Ellen
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Yann Rolland
Date: 3/25/2023 12:52:00 AM
thank you so much Ellen
Date: 3/7/2023 7:16:00 PM
I like the quiet too, Yann, You expressed it very eloquently in your beautiful poem. Very well written.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 3/25/2023 12:51:00 AM
Thanks a lot Shirley, i am glad you met my poem have a nice day
Date: 2/28/2023 9:54:00 AM
So beautiful and enjoyable, Yann. I love the imagery, such as, 'a summer road in the desert.' This is a fave. :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/28/2023 7:17:00 PM
thank you so much Evelyn, appreciate
Date: 2/23/2023 8:11:00 PM
Gasp of a summer wind - nice writing, Yann:)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/24/2023 7:49:00 PM
Thnks a lot JO
Date: 2/23/2023 5:09:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry, Yann. The peace and quiet are incredibly soothing. Thank you for visiting my page; I'm delighted to have met you. I hope we can continue to interact in the future.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/23/2023 7:36:00 PM
thank you so much, Sotto poet, it is very appreciated, i hope so to interact have a nice day yann
Date: 2/22/2023 11:37:00 PM
Brilliant poetry! Thanks for sharing (: #EM
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/23/2023 7:34:00 PM
Thanks Em, i am glad you liked my quiet poem
Date: 2/22/2023 3:59:00 AM
wow you gave me a new appreciation for quiet dear poet. lovely
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/22/2023 11:00:00 PM
Thanks Rose, people need quiet sometimes and the go the opposite way, it doesn't work for me, thanks a lot yann
Date: 2/22/2023 12:32:00 AM
Stillness and silence are quite calming ! Sweet poem dear friend
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/22/2023 11:02:00 PM
thanks for th appreciation, i love silence everywhere i find it thanks a lot yann
Date: 2/21/2023 6:06:00 PM
Beautiful poem!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/21/2023 6:23:00 PM
Thanks Aysha

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