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Quiet Turns

Each morning drifts like mist— soft, uncertain, but somewhere in its hush, I feel the weight of something turning dark nearby. I once imagined this place would be still, that the walls would not echo with things unsaid. But peace, it seems, is not something we always share. Patterns repeat— whispers circling like wind in a cage. The days loop like shadows on the same old path, a wheel that spins but never arrives. Solitude sings a softer song. There, I breathe. There, I unfold without needing to bend for anyone's gaze. Some birds only perch when the branch gives them fruit. They vanish with the silence and forget the hands that sheltered them from the storm. So I walk— quietly, gratefully, far from noise that pretends to care. And I hold the light only I can carry. ________________________________________________________________ Author's Notes: “Quiet Turns” is a quiet meditation on the difference between peace and pretense. Sometimes the loudest places offer the least connection, and it is in sacred solitude that the soul begins to breathe again. This poem speaks to that inward journey—when we turn from the noise of conditional love and false concern, and instead choose stillness, gratitude, and the quiet light God has placed within us.

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Date: 6/26/2025 5:16:00 PM
Hi ate Weng, It's a deeply reflective piece about navigating difficult interpersonal dynamics and finding strength and peace within oneself, even when external circumstances are far from ideal. It’s a powerful ode to the quiet resilience of the human spirit. Thanks for visiting my work. Stay safe.
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 6/26/2025 5:59:00 PM
I really appreciate your visit to my work. Stay safe and well always. ????. Thanks

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