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Quiet Time a Duo-Rhyme

Peaceful pastel sunrise_ porch time My quiet time in which I rhyme Whisper to God adoration Thank Him for His great creation For His Son Jesus, salvation Tell Him of my admiration And thank for love's confirmation Time filling with inspiration Out on porch time_alone sublime Dream more time with Him not part-time Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Contest: Duo-Rhyme, Lovely Invention Of The Late Mary Ports Written: July 9,2012

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Date: 8/9/2012 10:51:00 AM
A well deserved placement for you in the Duo-Rhyme contest. Congratulations Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2012 12:29:00 PM
We were both daydreamimg on the porch! I love this beautifully inspiring write, Sara...congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/4/2012 2:31:00 AM
Sara, congrats on your win, very peaceful poem...David
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Date: 8/4/2012 1:27:00 AM
Sara, Congratulations on your HM on this lovely inspirational Duo-rhyme. Andrea must have had a very difficult time choosing.
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Date: 8/3/2012 7:16:00 PM
Hi, Sara. I enjoyed your entry into my contest and wanted to congratulate you on the HM. The subject matter was wonderful! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/29/2012 1:30:00 PM
Sara, a lovely inspirational write you have penned. Best to you in the contest, a sure winner. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 7/10/2012 4:37:00 PM
Sara, this is lovely. I think 1 should find all the time to dream... most enjoyed...pd
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Date: 7/10/2012 8:24:00 AM
Beautiful, and inspiring, a poem of gratitude, well done
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Date: 7/9/2012 11:18:00 PM
Wow really beautiful Sara...nice flow & all...like it. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/9/2012 7:13:00 PM
I lovely poem for Andrea's contest, it should do well.
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Date: 7/9/2012 2:36:00 PM
What a glorious write my friend! I really enjoyed the greatest of messages within your poem! You have written a magnificent piece of art! I love your write! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/9/2012 2:32:00 PM
I like the reflection and rolling momentum adding to the sublime moment
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