Quiet Evening

Quiet evening Calm trees, without any breeze I rest in silence Heidi Sands 8/29/17

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Janis Thompson

Date: 9/5/2017 12:01:00 PM

Nicely said Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/5/2017 12:06:00 PM

Thank you Janis :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/29/2017 9:17:00 PM

Well done.. silence.. is golden!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2017 9:21:00 PM

Yes it is! Thanks Vijay :)

Terry Shuff

Date: 8/29/2017 5:56:00 PM

Good subject, original for Basho Haiku. 7,5,7. American form early 20th centry.original Japanese Haiku was short sentence, long sentence, short sentence. No sylables . Good American form setting, action or expanded setting, then conclusion or result. Observation rather th an any conversation. But somes in english we have to use conversation good poem

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2017 6:02:00 PM

Ok , Thank you Terry :)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/29/2017 5:52:00 PM

Perfect, Heidi, :) I stepped outside earlier to walk my dog and I had to stand still to hold my balance, the wind was blowing so hard... enjoyed reading ~`*

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2017 5:54:00 PM

Wow Eve, that is some strong wind you are having. I hope it calms soon. Please be safe. Thank you for your comment :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/29/2017 5:30:00 PM

You depict a very peaceful scene Heidi...wonderful write

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2017 5:32:00 PM

Thanks Joseph. It is very quiet here, this evening :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 8/29/2017 5:01:00 PM

Hello Heidi, This is the perfect type of silence for sure. Calm and quite. A very nice Haiku!! Best Wishes, Gary

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2017 5:10:00 PM

Yes Gary, the silence is very calming after a long day. Thank you ! :)