Barbara Gorelick Poet Crystalline

Quiet Comfort Edit...Part 3

Last light fades along the mountain peak

                The dusk comforts a weary soul


This singular day is almost gone

               Memory rides a carousel


Tomorrow will hold its own promise

               The easy welcome of a new dawn



For Brians contest

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Harmony

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Brandee Augustus September 30, 2009 at 1:07 PM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Interval" contest!

Raul Moreno September 30, 2009 at 12:57 PM BG, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul

September 30, 2009 at 9:19 AM What an uplifting poem. Congratulations on your third place finish in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor! Keep on writing. Karen

Carrie Richards September 30, 2009 at 7:31 AM There is such a peaceful feel to this lovely poem! Congratulations on your 3 place win, Barbara!! ~ Love, Carrie

Elaine George September 30, 2009 at 6:21 AM Beautiful, Dear barbara. congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Love, Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown September 30, 2009 at 3:35 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Barbara. Love, Carol

James Fraser September 11, 2009 at 3:24 PM Lovely images of the prarie and mountains in this lovely write, just beautiful Barbara. The Highlander would love to view these gorgeous vista's>>James

Krista Kurth September 11, 2009 at 7:43 AM I can feel comfort easing over me as the light fades. Thank you for this shared moment. Krista

Carrie Richards September 11, 2009 at 7:39 AM Such serenity in these simply lovely words. Nice one, Barbara!! Carrie

Daver Austin September 11, 2009 at 6:46 AM Yes, Barb, so soothing. Love, daver

Brian Strand September 10, 2009 at 11:27 PM Thank you for supporting my contest BG.Rgds Brian

Charmaine Chircop September 10, 2009 at 10:56 PM I can feel the quiet comfort surrounding me through these two verses...excellent----(sorry for not leavin you too much comments lately,its just that im struggling to be onsite..and im glad im here today reading these jewlels by my friends)Charma