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Quiet Comfort Parts 1, 2 and 3

Last light fades along the mountain peak The dusk comforts a weary soul This singular day is almost gone Memory rides a carousel Tomorrow will hold its own promise The easy welcome of a new dawn For Brians contest Colours Perception Harmony

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Brian Strand

Date: 10/1/2009 12:02:00 AM

One to add to my favourites BG(now the contest is judged)to re-readRgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Brian Strand

Date: 9/30/2009 1:11:00 AM

Congrats on you success in my contest Barbara.Rgds Brian My latest contest Five&Twenty is now open

James Fraser

Date: 9/28/2009 1:38:00 PM

Wonderful Crystalline Barbara, golly your on a roll >> James

John Freeman

Date: 9/26/2009 1:40:00 PM

And tomorrow holds its own promise, by the intention placed within it's it, Amazing write Barbara, thanks for sharing this beautiful flowing write. Sincerely, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/24/2009 6:39:00 AM

Barbara, I wish you the best in Brian's contest. I think I just didn't understand what he was looking for. Sometimes my brain goes on vacation without me. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/23/2009 3:01:00 PM

I think you truly captured all of the elements Brian was seeking and conveyed them beautifully, fellow LNC. Lots of beautiful images in this crystalline! Love, Carolyn