quiet

quiet birds
pouring rain....
plum's profusion

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/19/2024 6:50:00 AM

Nice. I can visualise. Love.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/19/2024 1:35:00 PM

Thank you, Anisha. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/14/2024 10:33:00 AM

Love the alliteration Sara. My plum trees bloomed earlier during a faux spring. :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/14/2024 2:32:00 PM

Linda, our blueberries and some other fruit trees have been blooming and we have had the fear that an unexpected frost would get them but so far so good. Sorry that you probably lost part or all of your crop. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara K

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 3/12/2024 11:48:00 AM

Hmm... so picturesque! Love it! -Smita

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/12/2024 1:59:00 PM

Thank you, Smita. I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting on my work. Sara K

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/12/2024 10:41:00 AM

Sara, Like the quiet sound of rain, I offer you my applause for this wonderful poem that builds a sweet image in my head.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/12/2024 1:52:00 PM

Thank you, Duke. I appreciate the nice review. Sara K

Paige Hind

Date: 3/11/2024 3:39:00 PM

Very beautiful.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/12/2024 4:13:00 AM

Thank you, Paige. Sara K

Jack Horne

Date: 3/11/2024 2:17:00 PM

I can picture this : )

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/12/2024 4:13:00 AM

Thank you, Jack. I like the smiley face. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/11/2024 4:39:00 AM

Sure it is the time for fruit to grow.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/11/2024 11:09:00 AM

Well, I hope that the blooms don't get nicked in the bud this time. Thanks for the kind review. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 3/10/2024 5:32:00 AM

So delightful! Here we are getting roasted in heat in our place. Your haiku is calming where rain pours....and plums abound.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/10/2024 7:23:00 AM

So sorry, Valsa, that you are in a heat wave. We will get warmer as the year goes on if as usual. It would be fine with me if it were a much cooler summer. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 3/10/2024 4:55:00 AM

How beautiful and serene, absolutely love this well woven haiku. Especially the alliterations: well delivered dear sara: pleasure reading your work: sending you light always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/10/2024 7:19:00 AM

Why, thank you, IE. I am glad you felt the serenity. Sara K