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Quick To Please

. Early this morn mine love placed the kiss Quick to please there was no refrain

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 5/4/2012 10:23:00 PM

Dear James,Very Clever, I like Crystalline form This is very well done, with LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Eternal Liege.. Harry - James I mustThank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments of late. Do YOU Ever read to Noah "Daniel" the story of Daniel in the Lions Den. Eternally...Harry

James Peranteau
Date: 5/26/2021 11:39:00 PM

P s...yes I did, now i just catch him from time to time reading some writes in different tomez uv mine Much love, james

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/21/2011 7:40:00 PM

oh sweet one James.. luv that title..caught my eye right away luv.. thankxx for the sharing emotion.. sorry cannot comment quickly ..had surgery on my right hand to fix nerve damage on two fingers..now in a steel plated cast for that and carpel tunnel... so out of commission of sorts ..not supposed to type but sneaking in now and then luv..

Nathan D.

Date: 11/20/2011 2:57:00 PM

go read jeffry cohan he is an awesome poet

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/20/2011 1:57:00 AM

Excellent piece! Always, Laura

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/19/2011 12:43:00 PM

Interesting work...I could go several ways with this one some good and some not so good..I think good is better..Enjoyed..Thanks for stopping by and reading my work about the tornado..It missed us this time and I hope never to hit use..Some got severe damage and one died close to here..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2011 11:35:00 PM

ME LIKES this one!!!! Clever.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/18/2011 9:01:00 PM

quick to burn out.....sorry have had a bad few weeks....

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/18/2011 7:00:00 PM

I'm with Karen. I had to laugh when reading it. You always use double meanings and naive Nellie here doesn't always get it. Got it this time and it's very funny! Happy Thanksgiving to you as well, my friend. Love, Carolyn

James Peranteau
Date: 11/19/2011 5:03:00 AM

Hello dear Carolyn ! TY for your sweet comment here love, yet I wanted to say; I truly did not mean this to be funny, though after reading this after your comment, I can see where you may have found a bit of humor. The 'euphony'(pleasant sounds) in a 'Crystalline', is what I wanted to share. It was great seeing you here today love ! Much love to ya !

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/18/2011 3:29:00 PM

WEll,.....DID U READ IT TO HER? :) Gwendolen

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/18/2011 1:23:00 AM

James....6 days since a posting......lol...u have been living life! Awesome. ....a lovely tribute to one's true love. If she loves poetry she should love this crystalline...if she hates poetry, well....she should love your kisses!!! ha ha. Gwendolen

M.I.A .

Date: 11/18/2011 12:40:00 AM

ahh, soo sweet james... loved the part, 'early this morn,'..