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i almost feel you like a linger of sun hidden beneath the darkest of clouds in a warm touch of weightless air yet i wonder is it really you or my mind lost in a moment of lonely time? were we ever really together in the confines of my crazy old life? is longing for you the only key for me to even survive this darkness? dare i reach in abstract light of darkened days just to feel you near again? November 24, 2020

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Date: 9/22/2023 8:30:00 PM
I would call this concert then shape because of all the questions in your poem. But I am not the expert.. either way this is an awesome heartfelt poem. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 7/21/2021 12:38:00 PM
WOW!!! What a wonderful write and shape. Life has many questions with few answers. I wish you would write more. I love reading your writes. Have a blessed day writing away.
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Date: 2/17/2021 11:13:00 AM
I often ask why do I often have to ask, why. Please see or comment my poetry.if can do.
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Date: 1/10/2021 12:42:00 PM
oh, this is SO good. Where ARE you, Sandy? I miss you!
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Date: 12/31/2020 9:49:00 PM
NiCe!!!
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Date: 12/25/2020 3:10:00 AM
Congrats! Cheering you with blest Christmas spirit, while sharing you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
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Date: 12/13/2020 1:33:00 PM
Sandra, What a question marked in life in this poem 'Question'. Seems answers are always harder to come by. -R
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Date: 12/2/2020 5:19:00 PM
Hi Sandra, This is a good take on the contest theme.What a thought-provoking question. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/1/2020 5:26:00 AM
Very creative work. Congrats on your winner. In relationships whether they last or end up broken we always have questions. Sara
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Date: 11/30/2020 6:14:00 PM
Really interesting style Sandy, very original and very well penned. Trust you are well my friend. Hugs and blessings,Gordon
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Date: 11/29/2020 9:12:00 PM
VERY UNIQUE! Many congrats, Sandra. ~ Elaine
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Date: 11/29/2020 6:41:00 PM
and here I am to say congrats. Lots of GREAT winners I am seeing.
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Date: 11/29/2020 11:29:00 AM
Always exceptional, is this an exception? How could it be when form mixes with perfection! Great to see you out and about Dear Sandy!
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Date: 11/29/2020 11:23:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the "SHAPE UP" contest, Sandra :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/29/2020 10:55:00 AM
Your imagery is always so elegant and the juxtaposition of your poem theme and the shape are perfect! So happy to see you on the winner's list again! Have missed you my friend. hugs and blessings to you!
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Date: 11/29/2020 8:05:00 AM
Sincere and asked so eloquently. Love it Sandra! Linna
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/29/2020 8:06:00 AM
Date: 11/29/2020 7:30:00 AM
Very cleverly crafted Sandra, words and the shape, marvellous... Belle
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Date: 11/29/2020 7:04:00 AM
A great reflection; a great shape poem, Sandra!! Congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 11/26/2020 6:00:00 PM
Amazing, Sandra. Mine sucks by comparison. I entered an oldie for Brian, in a very common hourglass shape!!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/27/2020 7:53:00 PM
Thank you... it was challenging but fun! hugs
Date: 11/26/2020 3:14:00 PM
A very creative piece, Sandy, nicely done. Best of luck in the contest. Happy thanksgiving to you and yours. Hugs, John
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Date: 11/26/2020 11:30:00 AM
An awesome write Sandy - dare I reach in abstract light of darkened days just to feel you near again? I hope with all my her that whatever you wish for comes true! Hugs and blessings dear sis. Jennifer.
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Date: 11/26/2020 10:59:00 AM
Wow awesome poem in every way. Love this
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Date: 11/25/2020 4:54:00 PM
Great originality Sandy, such inspiring penning. So great to read your pen again, stay blessed,Gordon
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Date: 11/25/2020 3:19:00 PM
So awesome, sweet lady. I love it. Would never have thought of it myself... never so creative as this. You're a blessing to my soul and I hope you enter this in the contest. It will surely win. God bless you always
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Date: 11/25/2020 9:11:00 AM
A wonderfully creative write Sandy! You're back with a bang!
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