Quest For Gold

painted desert lay before them hills with rings of gold and amber clay few plants, scarce water just a coyote or roadrunner on horseback they rode dreaming of hidden gold saddlebags filled with mining tools but not one nugget of treasure badlands had not been kind to them but determination still burned another excavation, another disappointment “fool’s gold” took on new meaning blistering day came to a close time to set up camp but the striated hills had eyes Dakota Tribe waited for dusk arrows flew fiercely bullets pierced the warm night air war chants accompanied thundering hooves intruders not welcome in their land two weary cowboys lay dead by morning adventurous spirits slain now just statistics in the quest for gold
*October 8, 2014
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Fields Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 10:05 AM
was like a cowboy movie. get you all fired up
Hamilton Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 10:18 PM
a fascinating pen Carolyn congrats on win hugs
Gibson Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 1:20 PM
I liked this one very much, Carolyn. Great story. Congratulations.
Callus Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 1:08 PM
I really enjoyed this write, Carolyn! held my interest from start to end. Managed to take me back to those days when Rin Tin Tin was at the peak of popularity. Congrats on a deserved win. // paul
Mehta Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 11:42 AM
A lovely write, congrats on the win,
Gorelick Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 10:43 AM
Lets make a movie!..cowboys and Indians! I miss those old movies. Congrats my dear LNC..BG
Allison Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 6:04 AM
captivating story Carolyn many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 11:06 PM
I could just picture those arrows flying through the air at those poor cowboys. A very captivating poem Carolyn. Congratulations on your win.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 8:58 PM
like the story in it.. you made me remember movies with this theme.. :D GOd bless you Carolyn.. :D
Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 2:05 PM
Sad fact of the old west many died but many lived..Thanks for the visits to my page..I am honored that you would fav one of my works..Sara
Mcdaid Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 7:37 PM
now thats a treasure piece beautfully penned dear friend
Devnath  Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 12:48 PM
A great searching region surely with nice quest. A beautiful picture is adorned with golden pen. Loved always,my lovely friend,bl
Lindley Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 10:38 PM
A fine write my friend. Should do very well in that contest.
Yvonne Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 5:17 PM
This is the best one of these I have read so far. Very inspiring. I am going to fav this one.
Trifiatis Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 4:31 PM
Captivating, dramatic, exhilarating! Excellently presented story, dear Carolyn!
Parker Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 3:54 PM
Nice story, is this for the badlands contest? I've got one in that one, its not as well done as this..good luck
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