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oh ... let me ... I thirst for you like the desert for rain the thoughts of your warm places dance on my tongue like tangy candy saturating my palate and my imagination … I have no reward without your plea I am pliable clay in silence but when your need moans my name I am made steel, unceasing … tell me what you want - your crave and your cry are my only cares desire has but to trickle off your lips to make it so, but please, make it so ... for I am moonstruck and madness until I partake of the sweet, tart ambrosia that steams and stirs deep inside ... you.

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Date: 5/25/2025 7:42:00 AM
How passionate and beautiful dear greg, i really love this poem that flows in such a heartfelt manner , in such a soul stirring rhythm, i do believe i am also moonstruck! So i love the ending “ for I am moonstruck and madness until I partake of the sweet, tart ambrosia that steams and stirs deep inside ... you.” You definitely are a natural with words! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/26/2025 11:28:00 PM
That’s very kind of you Inky, I’m so pleased you liked it!! :o) <3
Date: 5/25/2025 3:50:00 AM
Your “taste” for writing steamy still fills a banquet table.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/26/2025 11:27:00 PM
Oh thank you so much, my friend! :o) <3

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