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oh ...

let me ...
I thirst for you
like the desert for rain
the thoughts of your warm places
dance on my tongue like tangy candy
saturating my palate and
my imagination …
I have no reward without your plea
I am pliable clay in silence
but when your need moans my name
I am made steel, unceasing …
tell me what you want -
your crave and your cry are my only cares
desire has but to trickle off your
lips to make it so,
but please, make it so ...
for I am moonstruck and madness
until I partake of the sweet, tart ambrosia
that steams and stirs
deep inside ...

you.







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Date: 7/12/2025 1:10:00 PM
Yes ok Greg is back, woah no one writes sensual like you do, great write.
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Date: 5/25/2025 7:42:00 AM
How passionate and beautiful dear greg, i really love this poem that flows in such a heartfelt manner , in such a soul stirring rhythm, i do believe i am also moonstruck! So i love the ending “ for I am moonstruck and madness until I partake of the sweet, tart ambrosia that steams and stirs deep inside ... you.” You definitely are a natural with words! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/26/2025 11:28:00 PM
That’s very kind of you Inky, I’m so pleased you liked it!! :o) <3
Date: 5/25/2025 3:50:00 AM
Your “taste” for writing steamy still fills a banquet table.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/26/2025 11:27:00 PM
Oh thank you so much, my friend! :o) <3

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