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Queen Spring

My name is Mrs. Spring I can do some pretty wondrous things And Hidden beneath my heart felt sprinkles Are dew drop star wishes of morning light twinkles My all time favorite color is every bit of green And my magic allows me to change from winter into spring But Master Winter cannot seem to do anything in rhythmical flow And he even turns my precious rain right back into hellacious snow Birds begin to move once again and I love to hear them whistle Mamma bears and cubs cautiously appear making spring become official. Buds branch out from leaf baring trees and then flowers fall from the skies Children begin to grin again splashing in puddled rainbows; precious sparkles in their eyes. She's quite the sight to see; is that seasoned Mrs. Spring Earning her keep to remain Queen Mrs. Spring, loving mother to nature and goddess of green. You can always see why I mean just by the way we all turn green whenever we step outside, about to be greeted by the majestic, Mrs. Spring! The end 3/19/17

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Date: 3/31/2017 12:29:00 PM
Great personification of spring! A very creative piece! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim
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Ironic Zink
Date: 4/8/2017 4:38:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 3/30/2017 11:26:00 AM
Careful to dodge those falling flowers, great job Zinkster, congratulations...
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Ironic Zink
Date: 4/8/2017 4:38:00 PM
Thanks Charlie! You rock!
Date: 3/29/2017 1:52:00 PM
Big Congrats to win top position
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Ironic Zink
Date: 4/8/2017 4:39:00 PM
Thanks, I am beyond pleased and ecstatic that I have received so many great comments!
Date: 3/29/2017 8:09:00 AM
Hi Ir0nic, I must say your title alone "captured " my attention. And I began to read I saw a well put together piece . It had everything I was looking for. Good content, good imagery, form and rhyme. With a touch of humor. Thanks for participating in my "Spring Time" contest. Congratulations on your 1st place win: -) Alexis
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Ironic Zink
Date: 4/8/2017 4:41:00 PM
Thank you for being the inspiration and for my generous placement. Number 1!!!
Date: 3/19/2017 6:29:00 AM
Very cool ZiNk, love the tree shape. C'mon Queenie.
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Ironic Zink
Date: 3/19/2017 10:04:00 PM
Thanks Phil. I feel like giving this one more edit but I'm willing to settle for a lower placement leaving it as is. My gut tells me I could score a higher place simply by changing a few words but I'm mentally tied up with life and poetry. And by my lengthy comment replies.

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