Queen Over All Green
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Created by Andrea Dietrich with a rhyming scheme AabbcbcbbaA. The first line and the last line are both the same 11- syllable line. This form decreases in line length with each line getting progressively smaller by 2 syllables until reaching the one-syllable word in the middle of the poem. Then each of the lines increase progressively by 2 syllables until the final line of eleven syllables is met: (11/9/7/5/3/1/3/5/7/9/11). The middle word should be a word very important to the theme. It appears in the title or can be the title itself and rhymes with lines 3 4 8 and 9. (Center for effect.)
Fall’s changing colors are enchanting to see,
orange and crimson adorn each tree.
And as songbirds flee the scene,
Autumn reigns as Queen,
over all
green
in the Fall.
And life seems serene
filling in the gap between
when Winter arrives, and wild geese flee;
Fall’s changing colors are enchanting to see.
Copyright © Emile Pinet | Year Posted 2023
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