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Queen Bee

With her queenly ego, she said, "My name is now Princess". And so they complied ~ a loyal crew, whom by her words were led. Then one day, she chose to change, and took the name of "Mrs." She had a crown she did not know, the brain within her head.

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Bill Baker

Date: 3/28/2024 3:49:00 PM

We all age, grow, and learn some lessons in life, Hilda. Your poem exposed a few of the more universal states many of us have grown through and learned from. Short, but mindful poetry, my friend. Have a pleasant weekend! Bill p.s. I missed this one, oops! :-)

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/30/2024 4:04:00 PM

Thank you for your comment.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/21/2024 9:12:00 AM

This is a deeply insightful and introspective write, dear Hilda.. When she first was led by immaturity and lack of self-reflection, holding a sense of derailed pride.. But then she gained wisdom and a different perspective which is reflected here by 'Mrs' and 'She had a crown she did not know, the brain within her head' that's absolutely brilliant.. Love the ending so much.. Keep writing & shining, dear..

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/21/2024 10:02:00 AM

I'm honored by your warm comment on Queen Bee. Thank you much.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/19/2024 2:42:00 PM

I see it that her brain led her to be married , share and learn the prior downfalls of being queen bee. Her changes served her well. Great poem! :)

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/19/2024 2:56:00 PM

She didn't need to get married to be smart. Mrs. just rhymed. But she had matured. Her world shrunk, same as for a lot of us.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/18/2024 12:17:00 PM

I was never queen bee in the pecking order at home, but I do have a crown as 'Queen of Poop lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/18/2024 12:33:00 PM

i can relate big time Hilda but I am better off for making my own way in life rather than having everything handed to me on a plate. hugs Jan x

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/18/2024 12:22:00 PM

Me neither. I had a sibling who was a queen bee. Life changes.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/18/2024 10:31:00 AM

Dear Hilda, Your poem is a powerful exploration of identity and self-realization. The transformation from “Princess” to “Mrs.” signifies growth and self-discovery. The final line beautifully encapsulates the realization of one’s potential. Great Poem! - Blessings, Daniel

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/18/2024 12:13:00 PM

Thank you Daniel. Our brains are our greatest treasure.

Gary Radice

Date: 1/18/2024 8:41:00 AM

Youthdom's exuberance gives way to the realities of life and the wisdom that comes from experience. Just my thoughts.:) I really enjoyed the read. Cheers - Gary

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/18/2024 9:15:00 AM

Thank you.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/18/2024 5:28:00 AM

Cleverly expressed.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/18/2024 6:49:00 AM

Thank you.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/18/2024 2:14:00 AM

The Queen bee should not deem itself. A deep poem.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/18/2024 6:51:00 AM

It's a buzz. Easy to read. Short .

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/17/2024 4:00:00 PM

The outcome I see by your response to comments was good. I saw doubt when I first read the poem. But on reflection the brain within her head was a new "crown." I see that, and suspect that perhaps we sometimes make decisions we hope will turn out OK without there being a guarantee.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/17/2024 5:01:00 PM

I felt she was young and spoiled, but grew up. She became more of a contributor to society. Look at me talk. I'm retired.

Ink Empress

Date: 1/17/2024 7:47:00 AM

I know few like this, very well written dear hilda, i especially loved the last lines where you’ve written “ She had a crown she did not know, the brain within her head.” Deep! And i hope oneday she finds light. Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/17/2024 9:24:00 AM

Thank you very much. I love your comments.