Queen Bee

You may think it's cushy sat here on my throne
But life at the top bears a price of its own.
For though I get fed with delectable jelly
Just look what it's done to my poor royal belly!
My once waspish waist was the talk of the hive
Yet now I'm too fat for the jitterbug jive!
And gone are the pleasures of starry-eyed dating;
My days are now tied up with multiple mating!
Feel sorry for hens popping two eggs a day?
Well this dame has more than one thousand to lay.
And last but not least in this long fulmination,
They call me a queen but there's no coronation!
So should you still think that in life I regale
You might well receive a sharp sting from my tail!

03/09/18
Personification of an insect contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

Bee Creative Poetry Contest
Sponsor -Matt Caliri
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Messina Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 8:27 AM
I love this, Wendy. Soooo Good!!! Congratulations on your win....Hugs Charlie
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 7:43 PM
Wendy, this poem is so delightful! I love it! I am honored to share first place with you. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
Roper Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 6:48 PM
Awesome write, Wendy. Congratulation Queen Bee :)
Flood Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 11:09 AM
A smashing tale, Wendy and a worthy win. Terry
Goldsmith Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Queen bee" is a fun/cute write. Yes, watch out for that sharp sting in her tail. Have a blessed day writing away.................
Radice Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 7:19 AM
Great cadence with humour wendy. Congratulations. Cheers -Gary
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January 20, 2022 at 7:04 AM
Loved every word and line! What a great win! M.
La France Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 1:11 PM
Wendy, congratulations on your win _Constance
Watson Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 1:13 PM
Thank you, Constance - one of my quirkier efforts!
La France Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 5:45 PM
Wendy, congratulations on your Podium Place in Brian's FFI Blog Series with this great Personification !
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October 6, 2019 at 12:46 PM
I enjoyed reading this fun poem, Wendy. Congrats on your win in Brian's PPI Blog Series. It seems like you and Constance are dominating these blog challenges! All the best. John
Watson Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 1:00 PM
Thank you,John. Yours was great! I remember reading it first time around. Constance should receive a standing ovation as she has written new poems for most of the challenges. I wish more people were engaged in these though,John.
Ashley Avatar
June 20, 2019 at 10:26 PM
This is such an enchanting and enjoyable personification, Wendy. Beautifully done. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Mitra Avatar
June 20, 2019 at 3:32 AM
So well written.. Enjoyable read. Congratulations
Sands Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations for your win :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 8:14 AM
Bravo, Wendy. Witty and delightful. Congrats on your win.
Gauthier Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 11:44 AM
Back with more congrats, Wendy.
Mcguire Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 7:58 PM
Very nice! Good job
Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 8:36 PM
Congrats on your win with this witty number, Wendy.
Messina Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 5:29 AM
Love this Wendy. So witty and a joy to read. Congrats on your win!
Smith Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 11:48 AM
Congrats Wendy, much enjoyed :)
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 11:27 AM
This is a great poem, fun and clever, congratulations on your win in the contest!
Leffanta Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 1:19 PM
Bee happy! You wrote a winner! Aloha! Rico
Watson Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 1:22 PM
Thank you for the honeyed remark, Rico!
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September 3, 2018 at 8:19 AM
I smell a winner. This is fantastic!!! My best to you! xomo :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 8:42 AM
Thank you!
Watson Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 10:47 AM
That's very kind of you, Maureen. I thought your entry was so original and atmospheric!
Rowe Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 7:22 AM
I enjoyed this take on queen bees. Good luck in the contest!
Watson Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 10:48 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, Jesse. Glad you got a buzz out of it!
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