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Quantum Wave

In your mind I see a passing Wave – On a Different frequency To mine – If only you and I Could surf the same On silky waters Crest and trough in Time – The resonance that Vibrates for us both Is oh so tantalizing and So close – If only we could make A quantum shift And let uncertain Hearts together Drift!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2010 7:07:00 AM

What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future David. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/13/2010 4:34:00 AM

Some things are just not meant to be...Maybe later..Sara

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 7/12/2010 9:42:00 PM

Interesting write and imagery, David! Uncertain hearts however never find oneness until they become certain.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/12/2010 8:28:00 PM

So often we find ourselves drawn to people who are traveling through life on a "different frequency." I have tried to make this type of relationship work with no success. But if this is your endeavor, you know I'm wishing you the best, David. Really liked your poem! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/12/2010 7:57:00 PM

And waves can be dangerous too David .. an enjoyable read so flowing with passion in your lines ..still.. time heals all wounds my friends.. have u read Lasting Love... its happening when its meant to be.. don't give up.. your time will come too.. with lluv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2010 7:38:00 PM

Great flow in this nice poem, David. Luv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/12/2010 5:59:00 PM

sounds romantic, hope you are having a good day! enjoyed reading your poem. I had some fried okra tonight it was pretty good. It is not my favorite veggie...but it was free out of the garden.