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Quake Footles

Earth quakes Rocks slip Tremors jolting Tins clash Men scream Ground cracks Mud caves Sea growls Boats sway Waves roar Tides crash Birds roost Beasts cry Fear creeps Knees shake Rubble surrounds Fate sneers Death waits God helps Quake stills All wreck No death Silence pervades
May.29.2022 ~Placed eighth~ A Brian Strand Premiere Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/11/2022 1:35:00 PM
A great Footle write. I did this once at 2 AM. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend.................
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Date: 6/1/2022 12:36:00 PM
I like this a lot, Sister Valsa. Shalom shalom in Jesus
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Date: 5/31/2022 3:14:00 PM
Lots of action in your trembling footle!
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Date: 5/31/2022 9:54:00 AM
Valsa, this is one of the best footles I have read. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/31/2022 8:15:00 AM
Well written and insightful, my friend Valsa. Bill
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Date: 5/31/2022 8:08:00 AM
Congratulations Valsa on your win with a footle. I must try one
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Date: 5/30/2022 12:36:00 PM
Now you have God's attention, please direct it to the Ukraine....Enjoyed!
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Date: 5/29/2022 11:03:00 PM
Well done, Valsa. Best for a win.
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Date: 5/29/2022 1:06:00 PM
Valsa, you've done a fantastic job. In this contest, you have a good chance of winning.
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Date: 5/29/2022 10:25:00 AM
Very nicely done. Good chance to win with a set of footles!
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Date: 5/29/2022 7:23:00 AM
Very cleverly done, Valsa. I see the sights and hear the sounds your poem invoks.e
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Date: 5/29/2022 6:36:00 AM
Great string of footles Valsa, they certainly pack a punch four in syllables. Good luck Tom
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