Valsa George Poet Footle

Quake Footles

Earth quakes
Rocks slip

Tremors
jolting

Tins clash
Men scream

Ground cracks
Mud caves

Sea growls
Boats sway

Waves roar
Tides crash

Birds roost
Beasts cry

Fear creeps
Knees shake

Rubble
surrounds 

Fate sneers
Death waits

God helps
Quake stills

All wreck
No death

Silence
pervades


May.29.2022

~Placed eighth~

A Brian Strand Premiere Poetry Contest

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Paula Goldsmith June 11, 2022 at 1:35 PM A great Footle write. I did this once at 2 AM. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend.................

Anil Deo June 1, 2022 at 12:36 PM I like this a lot, Sister Valsa. Shalom shalom in Jesus

Kim Rodrigues May 31, 2022 at 3:14 PM Lots of action in your trembling footle!

Connie Marcum Wong May 31, 2022 at 9:54 AM Valsa, this is one of the best footles I have read. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo

Bill Baker May 31, 2022 at 8:15 AM Well written and insightful, my friend Valsa. Bill

I Am Anaya May 31, 2022 at 8:08 AM Congratulations Valsa on your win with a footle. I must try one

Rico Leffanta May 30, 2022 at 12:36 PM Now you have God's attention, please direct it to the Ukraine....Enjoyed!

Victor Buhagiar May 29, 2022 at 11:03 PM Well done, Valsa. Best for a win.

Sotto Poet May 29, 2022 at 1:06 PM Valsa, you've done a fantastic job. In this contest, you have a good chance of winning.

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2022 at 10:25 AM Very nicely done. Good chance to win with a set of footles!

Vijay Pandit May 29, 2022 at 7:23 AM Very cleverly done, Valsa. I see the sights and hear the sounds your poem invoks.e

Tom Cunningham May 29, 2022 at 6:36 AM Great string of footles Valsa, they certainly pack a punch four in syllables. Good luck Tom