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Quaint Roses

Sarah’s ruby lips were all of a quiver when she spotted Ted down on the quay To a platinum blonde he would deliver a gift Sarah is not yet meant to see ‘Quaint Roses’ is Sarah’s favorite perfume she’d seen it listed on Ted’s credit card receipt Sarah’s in a quandary, filled with dread and gloom at seeing her boyfriend’s such covert deceit Sarah’s meeting up with Ted and the boys they’re all planning a trip to Paris in France In walks the blonde with beauty and poise she goes and kisses Ted and his pal Lance! Sarah’s can’t work out what is going on as Lance’s wife has got short brown hair She turns around and sees Ted has gone down on one knee, Sarah’s now fully aware Ted hands Sarah her favorite scent which is tied with an enormous bow and concealed inside this present there’s a ring with diamonds in a row Lance’s wife takes off her blonde wig Sarah’s face turns a deep shade of red Ted’s delighted that Sarah didn’t twig Will she pay penance when they get wed! Mind Your P's and Q's Poetry Contest Required words: Penance, Poise, Perfume, Platinum, Quay, Quiver, Quandary, Quaint Sponsored by Michelle Faulkner 02/14/21

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Date: 3/8/2021 6:26:00 AM
Clever Jan. …:) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 3/7/2021 5:04:00 AM
Very creative script, Jan--enjoyed the story. Congrats on your win in Michelle's contest.
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Date: 3/6/2021 7:56:00 PM
Enjoyed your amusing story and creative use of the required words.
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Date: 3/6/2021 7:39:00 PM
I enjoyed this story with a surprise ending Jan, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 3/6/2021 6:26:00 PM
What a delight to read this comical poem this morning! You are an accomplished raconteur, Jan! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/6/2021 9:56:00 AM
This is so classic Jan, I can see this happening in a romantic comedy, sheer fun! Congrats and thanks for entering my contest~
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/6/2021 4:51:00 PM
Thanks Michelle it was SUCH fun to write:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/15/2021 12:11:00 PM
Jan, you have penned a wonderful poem for Michelle's contest, so well done and I hope to see this on the winning list _Constance
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Date: 2/19/2021 3:34:00 PM
Thanks Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/15/2021 12:05:00 PM
What a wild story, Jan! You made great use of the required "words" and I wish you success in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2021 3:34:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn it took quite a while to write:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/15/2021 11:43:00 AM
What a weave! Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 2/19/2021 3:33:00 PM
thanks Rico it was a challenge to write:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/14/2021 10:59:00 PM
You out did the trailer of a love story. Bet it will rate high. ~~
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Date: 2/15/2021 2:18:00 AM
Thanks Victor I struggled to get it finished and am delighted with the end result:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/14/2021 8:48:00 PM
Hi Jan, You've penned a good entry for the contest theme. I enjoyed it from start to the finish. The end wasn't what I expected at all. Great job. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/15/2021 2:14:00 AM
Thanks Alexis it took quite a lot of work to finally get it finished and I had real trouble even posting it yesterday I think there was a gremlin in soup last night as i couldnt comment either:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 2/14/2021 7:00:00 PM
That’s a lovely story/poem Jan, good how you’ve used the P’s and Q’s... Belle
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/15/2021 2:12:00 AM
Thanks Belle:-) hugs Jan xx

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