Quaint Roses

Sarah’s ruby lips were all of a quiver
when she spotted Ted down on the quay
To a platinum blonde he would deliver
a gift Sarah is not yet meant to see

‘Quaint Roses’ is Sarah’s favorite perfume
she’d seen it listed on Ted’s credit card receipt
Sarah’s in a quandary, filled with dread and gloom
at seeing her boyfriend’s such covert deceit

Sarah’s meeting up with Ted and the boys
they’re all planning a trip to Paris in France
In walks the blonde with beauty and poise
she goes and kisses Ted and his pal Lance!

Sarah’s can’t work out what is going on
as Lance’s wife has got short brown hair 
She turns around and sees Ted has gone
down on one knee, Sarah’s now fully aware

Ted hands Sarah her favorite scent
which is tied with an enormous bow
and concealed inside this present
there’s a ring with diamonds in a row

Lance’s wife takes off her blonde wig
Sarah’s face turns a deep shade of red
Ted’s delighted that Sarah didn’t twig
Will she pay penance when they get wed!

Mind Your P's and Q's Poetry Contest
 Required words: 
Penance, Poise, Perfume, Platinum,
Quay, Quiver, Quandary, Quaint

Sponsored by Michelle Faulkner

02/14/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Fowler Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 6:26 AM
Clever Jan. …:) Congratulations on the win! Linda
Pandit Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 5:04 AM
Very creative script, Jan--enjoyed the story. Congrats on your win in Michelle's contest.
Ligon Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 7:56 PM
Enjoyed your amusing story and creative use of the required words.
May Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 7:39 PM
I enjoyed this story with a surprise ending Jan, Congrats on your win..
Seeker Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 6:26 PM
What a delight to read this comical poem this morning! You are an accomplished raconteur, Jan! Congrats on your win!
Faulkner Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 9:56 AM
This is so classic Jan, I can see this happening in a romantic comedy, sheer fun! Congrats and thanks for entering my contest~
Allison Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 4:51 PM
Thanks Michelle it was SUCH fun to write:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 12:11 PM
Jan, you have penned a wonderful poem for Michelle's contest, so well done and I hope to see this on the winning list _Constance
Allison Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 3:34 PM
Thanks Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
Devonshire Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 12:05 PM
What a wild story, Jan! You made great use of the required "words" and I wish you success in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
Allison Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 3:34 PM
Thanks Carolyn it took quite a while to write:-) hugs jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 11:43 AM
What a weave! Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 3:33 PM
thanks Rico it was a challenge to write:-) hugs jan xx
Buhagiar Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 10:59 PM
You out did the trailer of a love story. Bet it will rate high. ~~
Allison Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 2:18 AM
Thanks Victor I struggled to get it finished and am delighted with the end result:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 8:48 PM
Hi Jan, You've penned a good entry for the contest theme. I enjoyed it from start to the finish. The end wasn't what I expected at all. Great job. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great evening:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 2:14 AM
Thanks Alexis it took quite a lot of work to finally get it finished and I had real trouble even posting it yesterday I think there was a gremlin in soup last night as i couldnt comment either:-( hugs jan xx
Edmonds  Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 7:00 PM
That’s a lovely story/poem Jan, good how you’ve used the P’s and Q’s... Belle
Allison Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 2:12 AM
Thanks Belle:-) hugs Jan xx
Romios Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 3:42 PM
Wow, Jan, what a mystery you do weave. I loved this. Pangie xx
Allison Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 3:45 PM
thanks Pangie am having issues on soup it took 3 attempts to post and i can't submit it in the contest and am having trouble making comments:-( hugs jan xx
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