Quaint Cottage

Beholding aspirations of the marigold sky I sailed
As hushed purple dawn was rising above the bay
Glinting platinum hued tides bouncing off the quay 
While the boat turned, in quandary of the unknown,
Cognizant that discarded memories had returned
To quiver bruised emotions on gold dusted ripples. 

Was that you, my dear, longingly saying hello
From our quaint cottage on glazed verdant shore
Crooning praises of your glittering rose bouquet
Where gilded rays refracted, sparkling magenta vase
Sitting atop embroidered tablecloth you made,
Graciously standing there in welcoming poise
Happy that you rearranged life, just as it once was,
Having removed all clues of our interrupted past
When penance of remorse sought brand new start.

I recognized ruby vows you sprinkled on daybreak
Bashful, as twinkles of smile glistened your face, 
Seductive in whiff of perfume blazing memory lane~
Indeed it was you pledging promise of a new day!

February 15, 2021
Placed 3rd: Mind your P’s and Q’s poetry contest
Sponsor: Michelle Faulkner
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George Avatar
March 10, 2022 at 7:25 PM
Hi Vijay....I don't have any comment to make other than utter a "Wow".... This goes into my FAV
Fowler Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 6:18 AM
Lovely Vijay. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
Pandit Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 6:26 AM
Thank you Linda for stopping by--much appreciate your visit and comments.
May Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 7:52 PM
Dropping back with Congrats on your win Vijay..
Pandit Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 6:24 AM
Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.
Allison Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 4:23 PM
such lovely imagery Vijay, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
Pandit Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 6:24 AM
Honored by your visit and comments, Jan. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 9:50 AM
Congratulations on your win. You have written/painted a beautiful cottage picture. Enjoy your win with blessings................
Pandit Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 6:23 AM
Much appreciate Paula--many thanks.
Faulkner Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 9:37 AM
This is full of your trademark lush bold imagery, especially 'glinting platinum hues' and 'quaint cottage on glazed verdant shore' - thanks for entering my contest, and congratulations!
Pandit Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 6:23 AM
Thank you Michelle. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.
Fenn Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 4:27 PM
Charming poem, beautiful imagery and great use of words with p and q.
Pandit Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 4:39 AM
Thank you for stopping by Jennifer--much appreciate your kind remarks.
Proxenos Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 11:50 AM
Your creative poetic soul soars in this poem and your heart and spirit always shines like a beam of light from within you and your every poem you write. Beautiful my friend. Hugs and blessings,
Pandit Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 6:25 AM
Much appreciate my friend your delightful comments. many thanks, Jennifer.
Callus Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 6:46 AM
A most impressive romantic, poem, Vijay. Imagery comes so natural to you. ~ Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 7:06 AM
Thank you Paul--much appreciate.
Crabtree Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 3:10 PM
Back to read this wonderful piece again. Wishing you a great weekend, Vijay :)
Pandit Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 6:36 AM
Thank you Angela--much appreciate.
Ball Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 12:34 PM
Very nicely done Vijay. You are a master of description. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB
Pandit Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 12:50 PM
Thank you Judy for stopping by with your kind remarks. Much appreciate.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 9:07 AM
Wow such an impressive classic style poem apt for the valentine season. I was admiring your imagery and fab vocab. Kudos! ........ - - - - - - - - - Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Pandit Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 10:24 AM
Thank you for stopping by with your kind remarks. Many thanks. I will definitely visit your page.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 6:27 AM
Romantic apotheosis of love eternal through imagery and verses divine, dearest friend, Vijay! Fave.
Pandit Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 8:45 AM
So nice to hear that--especially from you my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Gentile Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 4:29 AM
I love your romantic verses always so full of vivid imagery Vijay! This one , anchored by a Quaint Cottage is no exception. Good Luck in the contest !!
Pandit Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 5:39 AM
Much appreciate Mike. Many thanks for your kind remarks.
Nicole Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 8:31 PM
Oh my ! This is so beautiful and romantic. The images you paint are so vivid. These moments feel so real. You have created a Masterpiece my dear friend. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 5:38 AM
Thank you Brandy for stopping by with your wonderful comments. Much appreciate, as always.
Canerdy Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 7:25 AM
Another stunningly lovely and romantic masterpiece, Vijay! Janice
Pandit Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 8:23 AM
Thank you Janice--much appreciate.
Fowler Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 6:45 AM
Stunning Vijay. I quite like the promise of anew day :) Linda
Pandit Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 8:22 AM
Glad you stopped by Linda with your lovely comments. Many thanks--much appreciate.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 6:35 AM
You did such an amazing job on this one Vijay. I won’t wish you luck because you won’t need it. Let me be the first to congratulate you on your upcoming win. ;0)
Pandit Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 8:22 AM
Much appreciate Richard your vote of confidence. Many thanks for your kind remarks.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 4:57 AM
Such beauty from your pen, dear poet! I love that douse of perfume on the last verse, seductive and promising!
Pandit Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 6:34 AM
So very kind of you Kim. Glad your stopped by with these lovely comments. Many thanks.
Kannan Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 4:39 AM
Amazing poetry with beautiful imagery and lovely use of words... This will be definitely a winner... Wonderful job!!!
Pandit Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 6:33 AM
Glad you stopped by with your kind remarks, Supraja. Many thanks.
Rose  Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 3:51 AM
Oh Vijay, you take me away every time you write. You don't write every day but when you do, its got all its P's and Q's in the right place. (pun intended) :) Win big this shin dig, cuz I dig it. !!!
Pandit Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 6:32 AM
Appreciate your good wishes and kind remarks my friend. Many thanks, Vienna.
Horsman Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 9:34 PM
Your POETRY is QUITE outstanding Vijay. I will look for this in the winners circle, after the closing of the contest.
Pandit Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 6:31 AM
Much appreciate your vote of confidence, Harry. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Dietrich Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 1:38 PM
wow, this may be the prettiest one I have seen in this contest. Awesome imagery. Wish mine turned out this good (I have not posted it yet)
Pandit Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 6:31 AM
So special to hear that from you Andrea. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks. I am sure you have a winning entry--hope to read it soon.
Downing  Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 9:30 PM
I’m just in awe with this gorgeous imagery. I love every line as the flow together from your emotion... A winner for me :)
Pandit Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 5:19 AM
That is so nice to hear my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments, as always. Many thanks, Akkina.
Crabtree Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 4:31 PM
A wonderful verse, Vijay. A definite save for me. Hope you have a great week :)
Pandit Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 5:18 AM
Much appreciate Angela your kind remarks. Many thanks. Glad you liked it enough to save--thanks, again.
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