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Pyjama Days

a serendipitous day and a half when the big bang happened everything called to being from some singularity barely anything wasted except you and I on pyjama days when it’s sunny outside you said you might get dressed if it happened again I’m afraid I believed you

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Date: 3/16/2024 4:50:00 PM
you have such a unique knack in the way you end your poems...gives me pause every time. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 3/17/2024 1:30:00 AM
Thanks for saying so Sara
Date: 3/16/2024 1:18:00 AM
I read this as a motivational speech, I'm teetering on the edge of wasting a day - maybe I won't after all!
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 3/16/2024 1:22:00 AM
phew good job I intercepted with this then, go and grab the day!! or just chill it is the weekened so relax and enjoy it

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