Putting On the Ritz

Putting on the Ritz






Those weird faces
below glamorous make up,
The enormous laughs
under those debts,
Show off to whom
lesser privileged than you?
As those affluents
will never look at you !

Luxury of the motels
and wine in pubs,
Those night lusts
and hefty gifts,
Moving in bigger cars 
owning king sized houses,
Best of attire
embellished in sapphire,
False faces of ritz
truth dumped deep within.

Whence our kids
crave for foods,
And poor naked in streets
are covered only in mist,
Longing for a meal
as hunger eats mankind.

Why can't we be modest
to accept in dignity,
When at the lounge we stand,
Counting our guests
wishing there was a miss,
Showing liberty at heart
that weeps on money shed,
Hard earnings wasted
on an imitation game,
Pocketed inside out ersatz,
Putting on the Ritz !




© Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Written Sept 8th, 2015
For contest by Judy Konos 

Awarded 1st place win
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Cheema Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 8:47 AM
Uma, you've hit the nail on the head! An urgent need for modesty. Congrats for your win!
Callus Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 3:16 PM
Excellent take on this topic, Upma. Can feel the contrast between those who can afford to put on a show and those in need. Congrats on a worthy win. // paul
Johnson Avatar
September 11, 2015 at 6:18 PM
Congratulations Dr. Sharma on your win with this well thought out entry. Thank you for your kind comments on my offerings. Love, Joyce
Allison Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 4:20 PM
lovely taken on the theme many congrats Dr Sharma:-) hugs jan xx
A. Sharma Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 11:14 PM
Thanks Jan! Appreciate your kind visits to my page, wonder how you never miss out !
May Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 3:07 PM
Congrats on a great win Dr Upma
A. Sharma Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 11:13 PM
Thanks Joseph! Appreciate your constant support!
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September 10, 2015 at 1:22 PM
Dr Upma, Congrats on your "Puttin On The Ritz WIN.." SKAT
A. Sharma Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 11:12 PM
Thanks Skat! Always appreciate your kind visits that I look forward to!
Cwiak Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 12:49 PM
Wonderfully written...Congrats on the win!
A. Sharma Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 11:12 PM
Thanks Dan!
Ward Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 12:14 PM
Well done for your take on the theme and for your win, Upma! Julia, with my best wishes.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 11:11 PM
Thanks Julia! Appreciate your kind visits always!
Konos Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 10:51 AM
Thank you for being in my contest
A. Sharma Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 11:11 PM
Thanks Judy! Glad you liked this one!
Sergi Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 4:38 PM
Hi Dr. Upma: You created such a spin on the life that some people take for granted. My compliments.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 11:04 PM
Thanks Ralph! Appreciate your kind visit!
Tor Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 8:48 AM
Your writing is wonderful Dr Upma. Greed and glamour corrupts the soul. Narcissisim runs rampant with these fools. In the end there is retribution. Humanity is flawed and it is so sad. Love your truths.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 8:51 AM
Thnx Michael! Appreciate your visit, so glad u liked!
Trifiatis Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 5:14 AM
Rich and vain people should not provoke the poor. A wonderfully constructed poem with a clear message. Good luck in the contest, Dr. Upma. A seven!
A. Sharma Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 5:16 AM
Thnx dear Demetrios! Appreciate ur kind visit and words!
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