Putting My Life On the Line

Tiptoeing in the middle of  the night
Certain that Mom and Dad are out sight
Stealing away to do what I love best
Heart pounding like a hammer in my chest

There on those linen sheets you wait for me
All spaced out,  and as blank as blank can be
I close the door and hide away the key
Escaping  from a life of drudgery

Once again putting my life on the line
Though Mom and Dad say it is such a crime
Neglecting my homework to be with you 
Knowing to thine own self I must be true

So with pen in hand I lay myself down
And pray that this diary won’t be found

Author:  Elaine George
                  
Written:  may 19, 2014 
Inspired By my imagination for the  contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 3/5/2017 10:17:00 AM
Truly exceptional sonnet my friend. My well over two thousand poems written over a course of about 44 years are my diary, methinks, - as most are about me, my loves, loss , joys, friends , family , inspirations and life, etc.. Adding to my fav list...
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Date: 3/8/2017 1:11:00 PM
Hello Robert. Wow! Over two-thousand poems. Yes! I agree...our poems are truly expressions of who we truly are. Also, thank you for listing my poem as one of your favorites...this means so much to me. Elaine
Date: 5/30/2014 10:41:00 PM
A diary was the first place that we learned to express ourselves. I still have mine, and it is so interesting to turn back the pages and remember those days.... I really enjoyed your winning poem, Lainie. Very nice work! Congratulations to you!
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Date: 5/29/2014 6:29:00 PM
Full of imagination, Elaine, amazing poem and win...Linda
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Date: 5/29/2014 11:55:00 AM
Congrats on your win Lainie: Full of mystery and very imaginative. SuZ
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Date: 5/29/2014 2:40:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, Suzanne, much appreciated. lainie
Date: 5/28/2014 10:33:00 AM
love the mystique feel of this piece, elaine.. warm congrats on your top win and huggs!
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Date: 5/29/2014 2:40:00 PM
Thank you, Nette. Lainie
Date: 5/28/2014 10:00:00 AM
Lovely twist of the imagination! Another well-deserved win - Congratulations, Lainie!
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Date: 5/28/2014 12:14:00 AM
A nice flight of imagination and congrats on a fine win, Elaine
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Date: 5/27/2014 10:49:00 PM
What a lovely sonnet Elaine,, superb write,, congrats on great win !
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Date: 5/23/2014 10:40:00 AM
Hi, Elaine! I really like the suspense and mini heart-attacks this write caused me. I can relate well because I've been in similar situations and your poem brought them to mind. LOL I gotta make sure to keep my diary extra safe.
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Date: 5/22/2014 3:41:00 PM
Fine poem Elaine of hidden love. A joy to read, and deservedly should be placed highly <*> James :)
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Date: 5/19/2014 11:46:00 AM
Oooh, this girl may get in trouble. What a creative sonnet, Lainie! I'd give it high placement if I were judging this contest. Well said! Love, carolyn
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Date: 5/19/2014 12:47:00 PM
Thank you for your comments, Carolyn. Wishing you a wonderful day. bfn Lainie
Date: 5/19/2014 7:51:00 AM
- Secret thoughts and dreams in your book - it's not reading material for mother and father - a "sweet girl" poem Eileen - (Are you back home now?) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/19/2014 8:50:00 AM
Yes!! Until November. So nice to hear from you Anne Lise. Lainie
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