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From the Rafters

Time to put our clocks back Means we lose an hours daylight So at 4 pm the sun goes down As daytime turns into our night Springing forward or falling back Whose crazy idea was it to do that In spring we lose an hours sleep In fall an hour’s sleep we keep The disadvantages of this Means precious daylight hours are missed On the dot of half past four The sky goes dark, daylight no more On rising it is still pitch black Oh please do send our daytime back Till then I have no other choice Must hibernate till spring As daylight returns oh how I rejoice and from the rafters I sing... Contest A Brian Strand Rhyme Sponsor Brian Strand Written 23rd October 2018

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Date: 8/11/2021 2:52:00 PM
I totally agree with you, Ann! Great poem! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/12/2021 1:02:00 AM
Thank you dear Kim for your kind words my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 8/10/2021 3:55:00 AM
Time to put our clocks back Beautiful Starting line and then the continuous concept. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/12/2021 1:00:00 AM
Bless you dear Christuraj for your lovely words, always appreciated. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/24/2018 12:49:00 AM
I always think how strange it is that daylight savings time ENDS when we have the LEAST daylight!
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Date: 10/24/2018 1:46:00 AM
Hello PS, yes I completely agree with you - very strange. Today is glorious so I am enjoying every moment... Kindest thoughts Ann x
Date: 10/23/2018 6:29:00 PM
A fun poem, Ann, and shared anguish. Line xx
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Date: 10/24/2018 1:49:00 AM
Thanks Line for your comment. Yes I do really struggle in the darker months, but must try to keep positive. I have just woken to a stunningly beautiful morn so must get out and enjoy it before darkness descends! Kindest thoughts Ann x
Date: 10/23/2018 4:39:00 PM
Excellent penned piece Ann, giving what is brits feel about changing our time twice every year. Loved your flow and nice rhyme too. Have a good final week before we change at least we get extra hour inbed! Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 10/24/2018 1:56:00 AM
Morning Gordon, thanks for your lovely comment. I am hoping, like me you have woken to the most glorious autumn morning. The light is so beautiful with a crispness in the air and after witnessing the glory of another full moon, well what more could a gal want, haha, wishing you sun kisses and moonbeams, Ann x
Date: 10/23/2018 3:07:00 PM
Daylight savings time works for me, but this is a very well-written piece of propaganda in the form of a poem, Ann.
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