Puttin' On the Ritz

A four piece string ensemble competes
with fluted crystal glasses harmonizing
to the tinkling of fine silverware
underpinned by the purring whispers 
of well-to-do's and their hobnobbery.

Buttery lobster and rib-eyed supper in
opulent gravies and exotic spices;
cornucopia fruits on sterling platters
all floating about the ballroom on
white gloved tuxedos.

There’s a thick pretense in the air;
a high browed notion of superiority
reflected off each gold-fitted gemstone
amplified when ostensibly viewed
through a monocle lens.

I suppose it’s a lonely company they keep
esteeming each other as conquerors
by cordially extended handshake;
dodging and redirecting questions incessantly,
so as not to be rude, no doubt.

All the lavish excess of the night
is surpassed in every rise and fall
of her chest, as I contemplate silently
what fate has befallen that life, no more 
beaming behind those sapphire eyes.

Empty sockets abound, lifelessly
betraying boisterous expressions of mirth.
Dancing corpses swig their Dom Perignon
forgetting for tonight, at least,
the toiling lilies of the field. 

Preston Graham
(Grahamburglar)
08/16/15
For Contest: Puttin on the Ritz
Hosted by: Judy Konos
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 9/12/2015 8:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done.
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Date: 9/10/2015 10:55:00 PM
Exquisite write Graham! Congrats on a wonderful win!
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Date: 9/10/2015 4:05:00 PM
All done for show - you portrayed it very well my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/10/2015 1:18:00 PM
Nice winning poem.. SKAT
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Date: 9/10/2015 10:44:00 AM
Thank you for being in my contest
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