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Put Your Head On My Shoulder

I went to the dance, all alone and shy
I sat in the corner, I have no idea why
They all seemed to be laughing and high
Dancing and having good times
As I sat in the corner, singing like a mime
I saw her over by the exit door
Tears in her eyes, sadness for sure
I saw in her heart
The loneliness that was mine
I understood at once, this was my time
To be a gentleman and do what’s right
So I took her slowly into my arms
I said so softly
Put your head on my shoulders
I held her in silence
As she drained all her tears
Then the song ended and I let her go
She smiles so sweetly and said thank-you dear Joe
Leaving me here, to dance alone

I have to confess it felt very nice
To consol a sweet gal
Even she left me with no vice
Giving it seems, is its own reward
Even for the lonely, my happiness restored

Bonus Stanza 1

Thirty years later, as I arrive home
I kiss my love on her enticing lips
Her blonde hair waves with her lovely hips
I love her still, like long ago
When I said so softly
Put your head on my shoulder


Bonus Stanza 2

A place to cry
Put your head on my shoulder
It doesn’t matter why
Only angels need to know
That you are special
This is simply so

Notes
This idea came to me reading one of Dave Woods poems, listening to Paul Anka and a poem called “A place to cry” by  Kathryn Ramirez. Three completely unrelated events into one poem. The BlueRay version has more Bonus Stanza’s and is available for the low price of 99.99 per copy, Oh and also this is just a poem, there is no love for this dark poet
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Nance Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 10:22 PM
Oh I love it!
Vaso Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 6:29 PM
And I love that you love it! Thank you
Thompson Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 3:57 PM
Such a lovely piece Arthur, so romantic and sweet. Awesome job my friend. Take care, Jess :)
Vaso Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 6:28 PM
Thank you Jessica!!!
Deschler Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 12:20 AM
I can relate to this, because I was always the wallflower, just like this lonely girl, except no one ever bothered to ask me to dance.... I really loved this beautiful poem, Arthur! It is just the perfect, classic, romantic story! Very nicely done!
Vaso Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 6:25 PM
Thank you, may I have the next dance?
Lindley Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 12:14 AM
This is a gem , a fine wine and a treasure all in golden bowl served at a great feast!!! I love this write Arthur and am adding it to my fav list for it's beauty, elegance, charm , emotion and sincerity all wrapped up in in very pretty bow. Your wife is a very, very lucky lady and I am sure she sees your talent and goodness as your words offered here so often display! BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBRAVOO!!!
Vaso Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 10:55 PM
You sir are way to kind, I just might have to add you to the Payroll!!!! Thanks Robert
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 8:26 AM
hahaha :D! who says arthur is that all bloody dark poet.. :D! well in here, you brought me a memory of my prom night where I went home so early as no one asked to dance with me. :D!!! this poem is a sweet one with well a happy hearmelting ending this time.. :D!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 8:27 AM
buddy please mention Dave's poem title i want to read it too.. :)
A. Sharma Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 5:18 AM
True selfless love I would say Arthur,, else u would not hv let her go as the song ended,, lovely write my dear friend //upma//
Vaso Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 10:49 PM
Thank you , however I am not as honorable as the poem!
Smith Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 11:06 PM
Got change for a dollar....Very touching....I'll be waiting for the blue ray...cheers
Smith Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 11:21 PM
Off to work now
Vaso Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 11:17 PM
Yes I do, but lets not forget the sales tax!!! LOL Thanks Tim, hope you had a great weekend!
Manassian Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 10:08 PM
Splendid, Arthur....What an inspirational write...I LOVE how she was your wife after all these years. Believe me, a woman in distress is a giving one! ;) Dark poet??? Ha...that isn't you! You are full of light, my dear. Lovely inspiration from three different people.....
Vaso Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 10:12 PM
Thanks Eileen, however this is just a poem, I have no wife, seems poets and wives are not a good mixture! LOL
Walker  Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 9:43 PM
Arthur, a true love... Beautifully written... Verlena
Vaso Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 10:12 PM
Thank you so much Verlena
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