Put the Past Aside - the Dark Side of the Moon

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Bitter, the taste of tears on your color less cheeks, breathe, 
reality on the run hurts worse than the insane damage of
any words thrown in hatred; let my crooning eclipse you,
insolate you, like a halo on an angel. “Speak to me of us,
nevermind, the money and the great gig in the sky or them."


B itter, THE taste of tears on your COLOR less cheeks, BREATHE, 
R eality ON THE RUN hurts worse than the insane DAMAGE of
A NY words thrown in hatred, let my crooning ECLIPSE YOU,
I nsolate you, LIKE a halo on an angel “SPEAK TO ME of US.
N evermind, the MONEY AND the GREAT GIG IN THE SKY or THEM."

Speak to Me/ Breathe, On the Run, Time, The Great Gig in the Sky, 
Money, Us and Them, Any Color You Like, Brain Damage, Eclipse


9/11/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/11/2015 4:12:00 PM
Be the color Breath our on the run Damage any Eclipse you I like speak to me us In money and great gig in the sky them. Could'nt figure it out
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/11/2015 5:04:00 PM
The contest judge gave all the names of songs on 1 ablum & said use those words and write a poem. The first few lines are my verse- the second part shows you where I used the words from the titles, the 3rd part IS all the titles.
Date: 10/1/2015 9:24:00 PM
Excellent Debbie! As always, I enjoy your work!
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Date: 9/25/2015 12:19:00 PM
Very neat on how you did this poem. love phyl
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Date: 9/21/2015 2:47:00 PM
Debs. Is this that contest about song titles? Or perhaps based on your own poetry titles. It sure is looking cool how you did it. If it were an acrostic contest, you spelled BRAIN!!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 9/21/2015 4:02:00 PM
It was the contest using all the songs titles on a record ablum?
Date: 9/18/2015 6:25:00 PM
I dropped by to say Hi.......love always dear poet..........A.M.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 9/18/2015 7:58:00 PM
Thank you SO much!
Date: 9/16/2015 9:25:00 PM
so many claim....to understand the brain....working at only 10% function....what is an acceptable percentage of usage that would allow one to make such a gumption....;)
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Date: 9/16/2015 12:23:00 AM
Very clever, Debbie, all woven beautifully. Good luck and well done. Viv x
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Date: 9/14/2015 2:24:00 PM
Hey Debbie, stopped by for a visit. This is an amazing work of art from you. Excellent in form and imagery. (The picture fits perfectly). All the best in the contest too! Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 9/12/2015 1:58:00 PM
- Of best quality, as always Debbie - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/12/2015 2:26:00 AM
stunning use of enjambment, debbie!.. greeat write!.. huggs
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Date: 9/11/2015 6:02:00 PM
A well and extreme brilliant write.....at times, truth seems to be a poison but it is stimulant to life. The importance of friendship is to breath out reality to each. I love the flow of your write the truth within intoxicated me as a drunkard....excellence........A.M.
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Date: 9/11/2015 4:33:00 PM
Very clever acrostic Debbie I like the creative way you have broken some of the words down - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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