Sara Kendrick Poet Rispetto

Purple Horizon Proud

The sun rose bright red not a dark cloud in sight
           Few whispy cotton clouds spread around blue sky
Redtail Hawk in sky left nest for morning flight
          On those cold air currents he did swiftly fly

Door was opened by east north easterly wind
           Letting out illness, death, want_then in comes health
The sun set covered in dense clouds_cold its shroud
           Will it rise in morn purple horizon proud

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Laura Leiser January 30, 2015 at 6:06 PM Discovered this great poem as I was looking at your past work, Sara. You have a gift with poetry!

Robert Pettit February 6, 2011 at 5:22 PM Very well written for Dr. Mehta's contest. Congratulations on your win.

Sharon Ruebel January 25, 2011 at 10:23 AM Hello Sara, So beautiful, and message within just as Congratulations on your win my dear Lov, Shar

Carol Sunshine Brown January 25, 2011 at 4:59 AM Congratulations Sara, for the win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Rispetto". Love, Carol

Wilma Neels January 25, 2011 at 1:34 AM Stunning images Sara, congratulations on your win in the contest ;) Wilma

Andrea Dietrich January 24, 2011 at 10:53 PM I enjoyed your descriptive lines in this rispetto, Sara, and I'm surprised I never saw it before! Congratulations in the contest. Luv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan January 24, 2011 at 8:09 PM Such a beautiful image sara. Many congratulations for this top win.

Joyce Johnson January 24, 2011 at 5:31 PM Truly lovely. congratulations Sara. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 24, 2011 at 5:01 PM Congrats Sara on your wonderful win in the Rispetto contest with this elegant entry my friend.. superb as always.. enjoy with luv..

Audrey Haick January 24, 2011 at 12:40 PM Congratulations on your worthy win in Dr. Ram's Contest! Always, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire January 24, 2011 at 11:24 AM Excellent poem, Sara. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman January 24, 2011 at 11:22 AM Congratulations Sis in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta January 24, 2011 at 11:01 AM Congratulations on the well deserved win in my contest, Sara

Carol Fillmore January 13, 2011 at 5:02 PM This is especially lovely, can see this hawk flying off in the early morning! Rispetto, this is yet another form I'm not familiar with. This will be corrected soon:). I've been watching the news, noting the south is getting unusual wintry weather, likely something you wouldn't be used to. Just had a snowstorm that started yesterday noon, lasted into the overnight. Dumped about 8" of the white stuff onto us, an average storm.

Gert W. Knop January 11, 2011 at 6:10 AM This one goes to my favs, Sara. Great imagery and well written! Have a great week and thank you for your kind comments!....Gert

Afolabi Taiwo January 11, 2011 at 12:04 AM I am smiling and sweet refreshing feeling of observing with your only eyes the liveliness that usually follow when nature rise and shower the world with happiness, you are a poet of many colors, kudos

Debbie Guzzi January 10, 2011 at 1:55 PM alot of wonder in this one! Good luck in the contest! Light & Love

James Fraser January 10, 2011 at 1:37 PM You've written a beauty here Sara. It's up there with your best, beautiful poetry....:)

Carolyn Devonshire January 10, 2011 at 8:49 AM Sara, this is such a wonderfully descriptive poem. I like the way the door opens to release "illness, death, want" and allow health to enter. The reader can see the sun's red rays turning the clouds purple against the backdrop of the blue sky. Awesome write for my favorites! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 10, 2011 at 7:57 AM Very energetic piece with lovely visuals Sara.. that redtail hawk got me .. such a beautiful sight in flight ..good luck in Dr. Ram's great contest.. I added another verse to my "Perfection Plus" also..