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Purple Horizon Proud

The sun rose bright red not a dark cloud in sight
           Few whispy cotton clouds spread around blue sky
Redtail Hawk in sky left nest for morning flight
          On those cold air currents he did swiftly fly

Door was opened by east north easterly wind
           Letting out illness, death, want_then in comes health
The sun set covered in dense clouds_cold its shroud
           Will it rise in morn purple horizon proud

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2011

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Laura Leiser Date: 1/30/2015 6:06:00 PM Discovered this great poem as I was looking at your past work, Sara. You have a gift with poetry! Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 2/6/2011 5:22:00 PM Very well written for Dr. Mehta's contest. Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Sharon Ruebel Date: 1/25/2011 10:23:00 AM Hello Sara, So beautiful, and message within just as Congratulations on your win my dear Lov, Shar Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/25/2011 4:59:00 AM Congratulations Sara, for the win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Rispetto". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 1/25/2011 1:34:00 AM Stunning images Sara, congratulations on your win in the contest ;) Wilma Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/24/2011 10:53:00 PM I enjoyed your descriptive lines in this rispetto, Sara, and I'm surprised I never saw it before! Congratulations in the contest. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 1/24/2011 8:09:00 PM Such a beautiful image sara. Many congratulations for this top win. Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 1/24/2011 5:31:00 PM Truly lovely. congratulations Sara. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/24/2011 5:01:00 PM Congrats Sara on your wonderful win in the Rispetto contest with this elegant entry my friend.. superb as always.. enjoy with luv.. Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 1/24/2011 12:40:00 PM Congratulations on your worthy win in Dr. Ram's Contest! Always, Annalise Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/24/2011 11:24:00 AM Excellent poem, Sara. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 1/24/2011 11:22:00 AM Congratulations Sis in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 1/24/2011 11:01:00 AM Congratulations on the well deserved win in my contest, Sara Login to Reply

Carol Fillmore Date: 1/13/2011 5:02:00 PM This is especially lovely, can see this hawk flying off in the early morning! Rispetto, this is yet another form I'm not familiar with. This will be corrected soon:). I've been watching the news, noting the south is getting unusual wintry weather, likely something you wouldn't be used to. Just had a snowstorm that started yesterday noon, lasted into the overnight. Dumped about 8" of the white stuff onto us, an average storm. Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 1/11/2011 6:10:00 AM This one goes to my favs, Sara. Great imagery and well written! Have a great week and thank you for your kind comments!....Gert Login to Reply

Afolabi Taiwo Date: 1/11/2011 12:04:00 AM I am smiling and sweet refreshing feeling of observing with your only eyes the liveliness that usually follow when nature rise and shower the world with happiness, you are a poet of many colors, kudos Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/10/2011 1:55:00 PM alot of wonder in this one! Good luck in the contest! Light & Love Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 1/10/2011 1:37:00 PM You've written a beauty here Sara. It's up there with your best, beautiful poetry....:) Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/10/2011 8:49:00 AM Sara, this is such a wonderfully descriptive poem. I like the way the door opens to release "illness, death, want" and allow health to enter. The reader can see the sun's red rays turning the clouds purple against the backdrop of the blue sky. Awesome write for my favorites! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/10/2011 7:57:00 AM Very energetic piece with lovely visuals Sara.. that redtail hawk got me .. such a beautiful sight in flight ..good luck in Dr. Ram's great contest.. I added another verse to my "Perfection Plus" also.. Login to Reply