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They were her favourite, She loved them deeply, I saw her tend them with care, She communed with them, She sat in their midst in the cool of the evening, They blossomed with her every care, I was deeply moved, She trimmed and sold some, Instructing that they should be nurtured with care, When she was indisposed, They slowly withered, I took over and did her obligations, They didn’t respond at first, But later conceded, When she departed, I told them, But promised to wear her shoes. October 16, 2022.

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Date: 10/17/2022 4:19:00 AM
Quite interesting and equally touching ! It is not easy for another to take up the job of tending a garden that has been well taken care of by another. Even the plants resent the change. Glad you could soon step into her shoes.
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Date: 10/17/2022 6:05:00 AM
I'm equally glad I could.
Date: 10/16/2022 6:35:00 AM
A very interesting poem, Thompson. To appreciate the beauty of what another does is one thing, to be pulled in and do it in absence/remembrance, something else indeed.
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Date: 10/16/2022 7:10:00 AM
Yes truly, Jeff.

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