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Purgatory

When will my judgment come? He asked of him, who stood, face shadow-masked in moonlit dark, beside his right. Don't let it be this mournful night. Perhaps so, or not; has, or ne'er, they rasped, exhaling rancid air so brackish foul to cause a soul to wish for Golden Oriole. Who asked, who heard for judgments call within, without, or none at all? And yet, the shadow questions so; and answers as a cawing crow of dreams for which they dare not ask the truth, but hide behind a mask; as he, or they, for we are many. They lay upon their eyes a penny; I still have tales to tell, they plea! They spoke; what is you ask of me? What's done cannot yet be not so you held that power long ago and sold it, for this coin we give. You think that they can now forgive? He smells them near, their sulfurous breath; is this a dream, the truth, a death? Death is for those who felt some pain; who smelled the flowers in the rain, shed a tear at sunset's dying glow; it is not yours to now foreknow. They softly say with whispered threat. It may well come, but not just yet; there's time for you and I to play, for you to waste another day.

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Date: 2/2/2025 8:12:00 PM
Death is a subject that plagues everyone. Nobody is sure when it will come. There is no one to clear our doubts and apprehensions about death and the life after death. We all console ourselves, thinking that there is enough time for us to play and to enjoy another day in worthless pursuits. Dear Terry, enjoyed your highly rhyming poem.
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Terry Miller
Date: 2/3/2025 12:26:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 1/31/2025 3:05:00 AM
Evil can trick a person into thinking that life on the dark side is a good way to go. In the end, it means permanent death. Creative work. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Terry Miller
Date: 2/2/2025 9:16:00 AM
Thank you Sara, I appreciate your visit and kind comments on this dark poem

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