Pure Love

Pure Love Pure love is hard to find Two souls search in time Looking for the perfect match Two eggs ready to hatch Egg tooth scrapping escaping Hatching together timing matters Looking at each other with pleasure Wanting craving saving every moment Proud to be in this company Feeling elevated best of reality Two hearts exposing feeling safe Both have lived but still they give

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/6/2017 10:04:00 AM

Pure love, hmmmmm yes it is real. Perhaps it is the last love wairing for you to become wise enough to recognize.

Niall Fulham
Date: 8/6/2017 12:19:00 PM

Hi Patricia , thanks for comment ,, :)))))big hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/3/2017 1:23:00 PM

That love is worth waiting for. That is the kind of love to have. Lucky person to have a love like that. Have a nice day my friend Hugs....

Niall Fulham
Date: 8/3/2017 3:42:00 PM

Hi Darlene , thank you for comment , lol better chance winning the lotto :)))hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/31/2017 3:35:00 AM

- Agree, pure love is hard to find ... and even more difficult to find in adulthood - A poem from heart, lovely Niall :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 7/31/2017 9:37:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise , yes indeed the more baggage you have the harder it is ,, thanks for comment glad you enjoyed :))hugs

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/30/2017 9:44:00 AM

A very beautiful written poem, yeah the power of true love is so strong, it happens all of a sudden and when you find your true significant other, you re deeply lost in his/her love, you think about your partner whehter it s day or night, and I really like the way you ve explained the true love, the examples really touch my heart and thanks for reading my poems

Niall Fulham
Date: 7/30/2017 10:01:00 AM

Hi Faraz , thank you for your lovely comments , have a great day my friend :))))

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/29/2017 9:33:00 PM

This is darling Niall, love the imagery of the egg tooth... xomo!

Niall Fulham
Date: 7/30/2017 3:13:00 AM

Hi Maureen , thank you for comment , :))))))hugs