Medieval Torment

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laced waist chaste haste AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on July 30, 2021 for A BRIAN STRAND AUGUST contest sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Posted on April 29, 2018

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Kim Merryman

Date: 8/3/2021 8:13:00 AM

A wonderful footle, Line! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/3/2021 1:34:00 PM

Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated ~

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/2/2021 2:49:00 AM

Great Footle. Depicting the zeitgeist of the times.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/2/2021 4:38:00 AM

lol ~ thank you, Christuraj

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/29/2018 9:32:00 PM

Idea time: What if someone like yourself wrote two lines like those above and then invited another Poetry Souper to write two more, and then that Souper invited another PS'er to write two more ad nauseum ad infinitum...Might be interesting. What say you? (My unsolicited contribution is: Upstairs//Toothpaste). Feel 150% free to ignore everything so far except this: I like your Haiku, Line! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/30/2018 4:40:00 PM

LOL - I think your idea would need to be done via the Blog and would end up being buried in no time. Not sure what better idea there would be for getting this rolling successfully.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/29/2018 7:28:00 PM

I am laughing like a loon. Good one, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 10:09:00 PM

LOL Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2018 2:15:00 PM

Nice one, Line. You are so lucky to have time to write so prolifically as you do and still do lots of comments in the community!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 10:08:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea. I am lucky indeed.