Medieval Torment

laced waist
chaste haste



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on July 30, 2021 for A BRIAN STRAND AUGUST contest sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

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Kim Merryman

August 3, 2021 at 8:13 AM

A wonderful footle, Line! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M

Line Gauthier

August 3, 2021 at 1:34 PM

Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated ~

Christuraj Alex

August 2, 2021 at 2:49 AM

Great Footle. Depicting the zeitgeist of the times.

Line Gauthier

August 2, 2021 at 4:38 AM

lol ~ thank you, Christuraj

Gershon Wolf

April 29, 2018 at 9:32 PM

Idea time: What if someone like yourself wrote two lines like those above and then invited another Poetry Souper to write two more, and then that Souper invited another PS'er to write two more ad nauseum ad infinitum...Might be interesting. What say you? (My unsolicited contribution is: Upstairs//Toothpaste). Feel 150% free to ignore everything so far except this: I like your Haiku, Line! :) gw

Line Gauthier

April 30, 2018 at 4:40 PM

LOL - I think your idea would need to be done via the Blog and would end up being buried in no time. Not sure what better idea there would be for getting this rolling successfully.