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Medieval Torment

laced waist
chaste haste



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on July 30, 2021 for A BRIAN STRAND AUGUST contest sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

Posted on April 29, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 8/3/2021 8:13:00 AM
A wonderful footle, Line! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/3/2021 1:34:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated ~
Date: 8/2/2021 2:49:00 AM
Great Footle. Depicting the zeitgeist of the times.
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Date: 8/2/2021 4:38:00 AM
lol ~ thank you, Christuraj
Date: 4/29/2018 9:32:00 PM
Idea time: What if someone like yourself wrote two lines like those above and then invited another Poetry Souper to write two more, and then that Souper invited another PS'er to write two more ad nauseum ad infinitum...Might be interesting. What say you? (My unsolicited contribution is: Upstairs//Toothpaste). Feel 150% free to ignore everything so far except this: I like your Haiku, Line! :) gw
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Date: 4/30/2018 4:40:00 PM
LOL - I think your idea would need to be done via the Blog and would end up being buried in no time. Not sure what better idea there would be for getting this rolling successfully.
Date: 4/29/2018 7:28:00 PM
I am laughing like a loon. Good one, Line!
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Date: 4/29/2018 10:09:00 PM
LOL Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.
Date: 4/29/2018 2:15:00 PM
Nice one, Line. You are so lucky to have time to write so prolifically as you do and still do lots of comments in the community!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 10:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. I am lucky indeed.
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